Comments | elementalv: FIC: Lost, 1/1, PG

elementalv

FIC: Lost, 1/1, PG

Aug 28, 2006 06:59

Title: Lost
Author: Tara Keezer
Rating: PG
Fandom: due South
Warnings: It almost made me cry, and I wrote the damn thing. Hadn’t wanted to, but it wouldn’t leave me alone, so here it is. malnpudl, don’t read this. Everyone else, this isn’t a happily-ever-after story. It’s more of a shit-happens-so-we-have-to-get-through-it-one-hour-at-a-time kind of story ( Read more... )

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Comments 40

mickeymvt August 28 2006, 17:50:05 UTC

Ouch. Poor Ray. Poor Ben. *sniffle*

elementalv August 28 2006, 22:11:27 UTC

Sorry. Tried to warn you. I'm hoping the next thing I write will be cheerier.

zeenell August 28 2006, 18:07:52 UTC

....Okay, now I'm depressed.

It's so... *sniffles*

Poor ray. Poor fraser.

elementalv August 28 2006, 22:12:08 UTC

Sorry -- I'm so sorry. It just wouldn't leave me alone, and I'm a big believer in misery loves company.

lipstickcat August 28 2006, 18:21:46 UTC

Damn. That hits very close to home. *takes a deep breath* Extremely well written though, and well done for having the soul to write it.

elementalv August 28 2006, 22:14:07 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad I hit the right note with this.

ruthless1 August 28 2006, 18:32:19 UTC

That was really beautiful. I like how you really showed how much this disease can hurt people. It's making me a bit veklempt typing this up because I certainly don't like to think of Fraser having this. You did a very nice job.

elementalv August 28 2006, 22:17:01 UTC

Personally, I wish I hadn't thought of Fraser coming down with early-onset Alzheimer's but once the idea showed up, it wouldn't leave. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts about it.

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elementalv August 28 2006, 22:19:46 UTC

It's horrible to watch, but in some ways, Fraser has it easier than Ray does, since he's not fully aware of his losses. Either way, though, there's pain to spare.