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[elektrasai]

he said,
"i want to step this up a notch"
we were standing in the middle of nowhere
an unidentified dreamscape
he was speaking flattery in the truest tongue
all the things i wanted to hear
my affection swells
each time i sleep
perhaps one of the greatest tragedies in my life
is that i always, without fail, wake up.

Comments

i wish i didn't feel so pompous replying to people's work

[_lick_my_star_]

really nice.
sweetly simple and easy to relate to without being bland or cliche.

and i wish i didn't feel so pompous saying thank you.

[elektrasai]

thank you. it does mean a lot to me when people say these things.. it feeds my need to keep being creative and to continue embracing my writing.

[woundedmarigold]

ah, the infamous wake up. i never knew if the wake up was a terrible thing or if it was a lifesaver. maybe we save ourselves because we know it isn't real. maybe our conscious and subconscious have a war, and the victor is our conscious so we wake up.

i liked this too.

[elektrasai]

maybe. sometimes it just doesn't seem fair.
atleast i'm not alone in feeling this way.
thank you for your words.

[agolgi]

This is really nice. And fits exactly what happened to me last night. I'm adding you as a friend if that's alright.

[elektrasai]

thank you and yes, i will add you as well. anyone who likes randall "pink" floyd is kick ass in my book! (and jack and bob too!!)

[agolgi]

haha awesome. thanks for adding me!