[in print; flail-comments] You Only Live Twice; Parts 25b - 27e
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FACT: This was the first time I actually printed out your update BEFORE reading them online! So unless otherwise stated, all the comments written on the pages in this entry were my thoughts/reactions as they were, upon first reading. (Also, this was done ages ago before I found more highlighters and pretty coloured pens, hence the lack of variety in visuals below. :D)
*INTERRUPTION - Below (green) were my immediate reactions to Parts 27b-c scenes and I was seriously scribbling down everything I was thinking. I was on quite a high and had all these emotions flowing rapidly! Then today, I rewrote it to be more legible (purple). LOVE YOUR WRITING MADLY *
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FACT: This was the first time I actually printed out your update BEFORE reading them online! So unless otherwise stated, all the comments written on the pages in this entry were my thoughts/reactions as they were, upon first reading. (Also, this was done ages ago before I found more highlighters and pretty coloured pens, hence the lack of variety in visuals below. :D)
*INTERRUPTION - Below (green) were my immediate reactions to Parts 27b-c scenes and I was seriously scribbling down everything I was thinking. I was on quite a high and had all these emotions flowing rapidly! Then today, I rewrote it to be more legible (purple). LOVE YOUR WRITING MADLY *
*INTERRUPTION OVER. NOW RESUMING BACK TO STORY*
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