[Torchwood Fic] Above The Emerald City

[electro_club]

Title: Above The Emerald City
Characters: Ianto, Jack, Gordon Brown
Setting: Post-Greeks Bearing Gifts
Warning: Discussion of suicide
Beta-edit by: solsticezero
Disclaimer: Not mine.

A/N: I have to give solsticezero a lot of credit for this. She did a wonderful job editing this story, it took a lot of her time and she made it 100% better. The title is hers, too, as well

Comments

[misstricks21]

I really liked how Ianto's thoughts in the fic seemed to fit his personality and I found it hilarious that Jack would arrive with pizza and Guinness when he's attempting to talk Ianto out of suicide.

[electro_club]

I'm glad it worked for you. xD Really glad. Thank you for reading my story! :)

[be_a_rebel]

I think this is probably my favourite fic of yours. Definitely one of my favourite Ianto characterisations ever. I love how this is a mixture of sadness and awkwardness and sheer absurdity (Jack sitting on his ass).

And I love how you wrote Ianto as being so practical about something as emotional as suicide.

Wonderful story. You should be proud of it. I wanted to quote parts of it but I honestly couldn't decide which parts.

[electro_club]

Your favorite? xD Wow. That's awesome, dude. And really sweet, thank you!

I love how this is a mixture of sadness and awkwardness and sheer absurdity (Jack sitting on his ass).

Exactly what I was going for. :D *Dances.* I'm so happy it worked for you! I understand this one is a bit tough to get right.

[be_a_rebel]

It is totally my favourite. I loved every line.

[electro_club]

*Hugs* Thank you for telling me that xD Makes me a really happy panda :D

My personal favorite is still the Andy one. I've been trying to write Andy fic again ever since, but it never works. :/

[valancy_joy]

This is really lovely. And Ianto "you brought me a Guinness" made me want to cry, because here was this one tiny thing, a moment of thoughtfulness.

The tone was terrific, a nice transition from Ianto at the start to Ianto at the end.

So many great things, really ...

*buys fic a beer!* :D

[electro_club]

You are too sweet! Thank you so much for the awesome comments and for sharing your thoughts. I was really worried about this one, so It makes me truly happy to know that it worked out well. :) Thank you!

[mcparrot]

This was really well done. Ianto was prepared for everything except Jack.
I think you got the tone just right, Ianto's desperation and Jack's came through loud and clear. Well done.

[electro_club]

Thank you so much for reading! :) And for the lovely feedback.

[scifiangel]

Wow, so incredibly powerful. Love Ianto's inner thoughts. I can so see this happening. Wonderful.

[electro_club]

Thank you!