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consumed by such desire

Jan 31, 2010 20:31

Title: consumed by such desire
Pairing: Koyama/Shige
Rating: NC-17
Words: 3,815
Summary: AU Shige passes the ramen shop nearly every day, lost in his own thoughts and too busy to notice - until today.
Notes: I call this piece of work a modified villanelle short story. A villanelle is a style of poetry and this short story follows, within reason, the ( Read more... )

c: shige, p: koyama/shige, c: koyama, #one-shot, au, r: nc-17

Comments 27

yuukarin February 1 2010, 04:33:47 UTC

...assdlkjsfljflewjflkwjekll
<3
I havent been feeling the koyashige recently but I'm definitely feeling it now.
:D thank you so much for this. You never fail to amaze me~<3 your AU's are absolutely fantastic.

sanjihan February 1 2010, 05:13:39 UTC

Hey, anything I can do to help people feel the KoyaShige love is fine by me. XD Thank YOU for commenting and alksdjaoiejrasdf YOU FLATTER ME. *loves*

fairy_illusions February 1 2010, 05:03:18 UTC

I think my favorite part has to be the the cake. Koyama WOULD remember the first day Shige ever walked in lol He probably remembers it as "the day the cute guy outside the shop got trampled by a jogger and decided to come in for ramen"

KoyaShige is rabu &hearts

sanjihan February 1 2010, 05:14:50 UTC

XD You WOULD like the cake part. *cuddles you*

fairy_illusions February 1 2010, 07:26:56 UTC

I am a fan of cutesy sappy fluff more than smut so...well duh XD

Write moar ficsssss :DDD

sanjihan February 1 2010, 07:36:15 UTC

I am a fan of BOTH! Equally! XD Except that my fic list says otherwise. ...I can't help that I don't write fluff easily.

alskdjari! I've posted three in the last week!

miss_jelly February 1 2010, 06:16:27 UTC

sgnbdvg I loved the style you used, it worked so well and it turned out very beautifully :) "It is unbelievable, he thinks, to be consumed by such desire." I loved the repetition of this line, but then I just love repetition, when it's used well :p I haven't read any KoyaShige is a while, but man was this lovely~

sanjihan February 1 2010, 06:45:05 UTC

Thank you. I was very nervous about this fic so I'm REALLY happy to see that you liked it. :D *hugs*

dw9lives February 1 2010, 06:56:06 UTC

i can never have enough of Koyama topping. haha. the story was really cute, though. i really liked the scene with Koyama's nephews, they are the cutest things ever! luckly, it's easy to imagine them since pictures get posted pretty often.

sanjihan February 1 2010, 07:11:09 UTC

Mmm, me neither. :D But you know that. :D And yes! Koyama's nephews are SUPER cute. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

vinyaromeniel February 1 2010, 13:50:50 UTC

If I ever turn into a KoyaShige fan, it's entirely your fault.. completely. Just so you know.

Apart from that: this beautifully written and I envy you for your ability to write so beautiful things. &hearts

I feel strangely light and somehow feel all bubbly inside now :)

sanjihan February 1 2010, 17:50:19 UTC

I would gladly take the blame. :D Thank you, you're so sweet. :D And I love feeling that way sooooo good! *hugs*