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Make Some Noise

Nov 21, 2009 11:57

Title: Make Some Noise
Pairing: Koyama/Ryo
Rating: NC-17
Words: 2,037
Summary: KoyaRyo have some fun off the clock. Ryo shows some of his flexible S/M. XD PWP, you've been warned. Romeos 'verse.

( The client left them sprawled bonelessly on the bed, tanned skin glistening against the cream-colored sheets. )

p: koyama/ryo, c: ryo, c: koyama, #one-shot, au: romeos 'verse, r: nc-17

Comments 17

indian_monsoon November 21 2009, 17:07:28 UTC

O WOW That was HOT.

I must say, I am not at all a KoyaRyo fan (and you know that), but I love this. I love how Koyama takes care of Ryo, and I love how Ryo lets him because he is tired of being in control all the time, and the dynamic that you have between them is just right, and would make sense even in the idol world. KoyaRyo, as compared to KoyaShige is slightly different. It's not as blatant, not even as comfortable but just as warm and sweet.

sanjihan November 21 2009, 17:12:17 UTC

KoyaRyo, as compared to KoyaShige is slightly different. It's not as blatant, not even as comfortable but just as warm and sweet.
Exactly! Maybe that's why I like them so much. After all the jaw-aching sweetness of KoyaShige it's nice to have a little KoyaRyo. XD They make me warm and fuzzy in their own weird way. :)

Thank youuuuuu! (For your support, for reading, for commenting...you know I love you.)

vinyaromeniel November 21 2009, 17:31:31 UTC

Gosh, dear, girl. *chokes*

KoyaRyo the new OTP? Since when is Koyama allowed to be able to handle Ryo like that? sdguiohdgh I completely disapprove and yet again I was like safohsdfih and it makes perfectly sense.
KoyaRyo still seem to be the perfect NC-17 couple haha Sometimes I believe Ryo is the only one who can make Koyama live out his kinks and Koyama the only one to actually make Ryo whimper like a little baby.

wow thank you. :D

RyoShige is still my OTP just so you know

sanjihan November 21 2009, 17:46:25 UTC

LOL. Nice reaction. XD KoyaShige is the only OTP for me, I think, but I enjoy VERY MUCH pairing Koyama with Ryo for just the reasons you said and a few more. :D I wish I could write Ryo/Shige for your sake but they kill me. Thank you!

beltenebra November 22 2009, 15:14:27 UTC

*___*

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........gkajdgaskdgjkngm, bfd

Sweet Zombie Jesus, Tara.

That was SO FRIGGIN' HOT.

Dominant Koyama! Grouchily submissive Ryo!!

He dropped to his elbows and pillowed his cheek against his forearm, biting it to keep from making any more embarrassing pleas, but Koyama was tugging on his hair, pulling his head back.

“I. Want. To. Hear.” he growled, punctuating each word with a hard thrust.

This bit nearly killed me. It was so good. So many of my kinks right there, in one neat little package. gah.

Just.... amazing. Never stop writing.

<3<3<3<3<3

sanjihan November 22 2009, 15:44:18 UTC

YAY!!! Just the response I was hoping for! I'm totally glad it worked for you. XD I really enjoyed writing this one. KoyaRyo is just so much fun for me. :D Thank you!!

imifumei November 27 2009, 19:53:53 UTC

The fact that it took me a few days to get around to reading this should not in any way reflect the level of awesome involved.

This was sooooooo good.

Just. Wow

Really, this was so nice. I loved the kissing best (not that the sex wasn't amazing). The coaxing and the fact that Ryo can't resist because deep down he doesn't want to. . .spluh.

Very nice.

sanjihan December 3 2009, 01:38:39 UTC

I swear I replied to this...And now you're not going to be online for a while. :(

The coaxing and the fact that Ryo can't resist because deep down he doesn't want to. . .spluh.
This is ultimately the reason I love KoyaRyo so much. XD

I'm really really glad you liked it. :D

track_04 December 4 2009, 05:44:14 UTC

I finally got a chance to read this and augh, I love love love the way you write these two together. They're hot and sweet and I really adored the ending of this. I hope you keep writing in this 'verse because I've adored everything you've done in it! ;o;

sanjihan December 4 2009, 06:32:20 UTC

KoyaRyo is my guilty pleasure and I love them together so so much. I'm definitely going to keep going in this 'verse and have already started a ShigeMassu but I'm sure I'll get some more ideas. :D Thank you for such a lovely comment! (Maybe we'll be getting stripper!fic from you? XD)

track_04 December 4 2009, 15:10:12 UTC

Ooooh, yes! I'm really excited to see where you take this verse. I didn't comment on the fic introducing ShigeMassu (because I suck at remembering to comment sometimes XD;) but I love the way you introduced them into this verse! I also love them together as a pairing and they're not written nearly enough IMO. >.> I was really thrilled that you expanded on the original story because I loved it so much. <333 (And yes... hopefully! XD)