Comments | electrictoad: 'Hope' is the thing with feathers

sanjihan in electrictoad

'Hope' is the thing with feathers

Oct 15, 2010 23:02

Title: 'Hope' is the thing with feathers
Characters: Koyama, Massu
Rating: PG
Words: 2,260
Warnings: Space AU, insanity (like… really.)
Summary: When a crisis occurs on space station Nem, counselor Koyama keeps everyone's hopes up, but who raises his?
Notes: Okay, I did what research I could on the science-y aspects of this but I have no idea what ( Read more... )

r: pg, au, c: yamapi, , #one-shot, c: koyama, p: koyama/massu, c: massu

Comments 21

carmine_pink October 16 2010, 11:39:52 UTC

I... am probably not smart enough for this XD So there are six crew, Koyama, Yamapi, Nakamaru, Yasuda, Yokoyama... wait, that's only five. And then Yamapi said 'take the strain of five people'... so Koyama had been hallucinating since the very beginning, thinking there were six people? Was the sixth one Massu, or someone else?

There are a lot of wonderful things in the world, and Massu holding Koyama until he falls asleep is definitely one of them &hearts

And congrats for achieving your goal!

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sanjihan October 16 2010, 16:20:51 UTC

I knew that was going to trip people up. I just never mentioned the sixth member. I'll just go in and add him now.

Anyway. XD I'm glad you liked it. It's a little bit strange, but it's what I wanted. heh.

omoikkiri October 16 2010, 22:21:58 UTC

+_+ This is really great! I really love sci-fi-esque AUs, but good ones in (JE) fics are so hard to come by.
...I wish I could offer you a better comment, but um. <3

sanjihan October 16 2010, 23:01:20 UTC

Thank you! This is a great comment, don't worry. I was afraid no one would read it because of the warnings. XD So I'm glad that you have and that you enjoyed it. :D

strawberryparty October 17 2010, 02:01:03 UTC

Aw man, just reading this made me feel anxious! I'm glad... hallucination/apparition/whatever!Massu came along to make Koyama feel better ♥

sanjihan October 17 2010, 02:04:35 UTC

I'm glad... hallucination/apparition/whatever!Massu came along to make Koyama feel better ♥
That is infinitely creepy for some reason. XD

<3

dw9lives October 17 2010, 03:27:06 UTC

i wonder if Koyama will let me borrow Massu... :P

♥!!!

sanjihan October 17 2010, 04:02:32 UTC

I'm sure he would if you asked nicely and promised to bring him back. <3

zheinpathos October 17 2010, 16:59:50 UTC

I need a Massu ;A;

Lovely work! <3

sanjihan October 17 2010, 17:07:42 UTC

You and me both, yo. I could sure use some encouragement sometimes. Luckily I have Cait... she might as well be my other half. XD

Thank you!!