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sanjihan in electrictoad

In it to Win it

Aug 21, 2010 12:54

Title: In it to Win it
Characters : NewS - Koyama, Shige, Tegoshi, Massu
Rating: PG (for sort of violent themes? But it isn't violent.)
Summary: Boys playing with toys.
Notes: Written for yey_yey for je_justfriends (which was a FANTASTIC exchange). Thanks to my beta, imifumei. Originally posted here.

( They crouched down behind a large rock, rifle-stocks resting back against their shoulders as they caught their breath. Well, Shige caught his breath. )

c: shige, c: ryo, c: tegoshi, r: pg, #one-shot, c: koyama, fic challenge/exchange repost, c: massu

Comments 4

shigefan1992 August 21 2010, 23:40:01 UTC

This was AWESOME!

I LOVE gen, and this was just great. I honestly thought it was quite funny, especially to imagine Koyama in this particular situation.

And that last shot Shige got at Tegoshi Just because That was just perfect.

This was great, and I honestly loved it, and I can't help but grin thinking about Massu XD

sanjihan August 22 2010, 02:07:08 UTC

Hehehe, thanks! I really had a lot of fun writing it. :D

vinyaromeniel August 22 2010, 04:14:39 UTC

BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I'd love.. LOVE to see that on TV :DDDD

But everyone, excluding Tegoshi, thought that, in this situation, it was definitely the pie. Tegoshi thought someone was going to find a fish in their bag. And it wasn't going to be pretty. That smell was hard to get out.

Seriously. Do not mess with Tegoshi the evil thing xD

sanjihan August 22 2010, 04:23:37 UTC

Man, what I wouldn't love about that being an actual episode. <3

Tegoshi. ;)

Thanks!