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When Fire Falls Like Rain

Aug 04, 2010 16:00

Title: When Fire Falls Like Rain
Pairing: Koyama/Shige/Ryo
Rating: PG (for light angst and cursing)
Words: 1,970
Summary: (Elementals 'verse) Finding a balance.
Notes: Thanks to beltenebra for all the encouragement. Inspired in part by Paramore's Brick by Boring Brick which is gorgeous both visually and aurally. Cut text = lyrics.

( if it's not real, you can't hold it in your hand, you can't feel it in your heart )

c: shige, c: ryo, p: koyama/ryo/shige, r: pg, c: koyama, #one-shot, au: elementals 'verse

Comments 27

dw9lives August 4 2010, 20:26:08 UTC

i'm horrible with words so i feel like this comment is nothing compared to how much your writing makes me feel. i'm very thankful to have found you and your writing, this story really got me, i could feel everything and it scares me a bit but it's kind of cool, thank you.

sanjihan August 4 2010, 20:29:43 UTC

That makes me really happy. At one point I actually had to have Amy read it because I couldn't tell if I was crazy or if the writing just made me feel that way... so I can empathize. XD I'm always so grateful for your comments. They really mean a lot to me. <3

Also... YOUR ICON. <3 <3 <3

yey_yey August 4 2010, 20:48:04 UTC

YOU UPDATED THIS VERSE :DDDDD

I seriously love this shit. Everything matches and comes together so well, and the imagery between each of the guys and their respective element is so perfect and wonderful ♥
AND THE KOYARYOSHIGE! The conflict among them was so heart-wrenching and felt so real.

I've been hoping for so long that you'd write a follow-up, so this is like a dream for me ~

sanjihan August 4 2010, 22:55:59 UTC

Oh man. I'm so stoked that you liked this so much. :D Thank you! <3

tokeruyouna August 4 2010, 23:54:52 UTC

This just blew me away. It really does seem like almost everything you wrote was connected to the idea of what is going on in this verse, which is impressive.

sanjihan August 5 2010, 01:06:54 UTC

Thank you! :D

carmine_pink August 5 2010, 04:41:40 UTC

*sigh* Oh, Tara. Why so awesome?

I can't even begin to describe what I liked about this. The vivid imagery. The quiet desperation. The helplessness and guilt. Shige's willingness to love Ryo for Koyama's sake. Pretty boys cuddling each other. <3 Did I mention you're awesome? ;D

sanjihan August 5 2010, 04:50:29 UTC

<3

Pretty boys cuddling each other.
*giggles* I may be weak to that myself. XD

Thank you!!

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sanjihan August 5 2010, 05:28:26 UTC

:D Thank you! (Man I need a RyoShige icon...) I hope they find a way to make it work too... I haven't found one yet. XD Thanks again!