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The Absence Equation - Chapter 4

Jul 25, 2010 19:59

Title: The Absence Equation - Chapter 4
Group/Pairings: NewS. Pairings: Koyama/Shige, Massu/Yamapi
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, cursing, sexual implications.
Words: 3,750
Summary: First try: "The fate of the world as they know it rests in the hands of one Kato Shigeaki. Oh shit." Possibly more coherent try (though it sounds like a lame old- ( Read more... )

c: shige, c: ryo, c: tegoshi, au, c: yamapi, p: massu/yamapi, r: r, #multi-chapter, p: koyama/shige, c: koyama, c: massu

Comments 8

vinyaromeniel July 26 2010, 11:33:35 UTC

I have something to critizise. And really it's stupid and don't take this all too serious because this fic is awesome but.. Tara. Why so stereotypical?
Germany is big and yet you chose Munich sdofhsodifhsdofh (Not that Munich= Germany but oh well)
And bratwurst and potato dumplings? xD Potato dumplings are not that easy to make and besides don't go together with bratwurst at all xD :DDDDDDD

Apart from that.. going back to read. You know.. I actually wanted to do something else but again you managed to distract me asofhsofih this will take me forever to finish haha

So far it's soooooo awesome. And yay you finally managed to finish it :D

sanjihan July 26 2010, 15:45:12 UTC

It's hard not to take it somewhat serious since I put thought into my locations. I also chose Milan and NYC and Chicago and Dallas and Los Angelos so it wasn't just Germany that got "stereotypical" major cities. Munich because it's a large city in Germany (and Jansen didn't want them off the map so a large city was necessary) and it's not Berlin and because it has an international airport there and (more importantly) another international airport within decent driving distance. I did actually look it up but didn't want to spend an hour mapping out every single airport in Germany just so I could find a less stereotypical city in Germany for them to visit.

As for potato dumplings, I've made them before and didn't find them to be too heinous to make, but I was also thinking "frozen" which I know exist here and maybe it's just because we're lazy Americans but I assumed that they exist in Germany. The meal was not supposed to match. It was just supposed to be something they had on hand that could go together should they so choose. I ( ... )

indian_monsoon July 27 2010, 00:25:02 UTC

“Shige was just trying to help save the universe as we know it,” he said sweetly. “Who can fault him for trying?”

“Say it,” Shige growled, “or you’ll be lording it over me for days.”

Tegoshi laughed for a moment and once he’d quieted down he looked at Shige with an impish grin. “I told you so.”

“Jerk,” Shige replied gruffly and Tegoshi laughed so hard he snorted.

This made me laugh out REALLY loud.

sanjihan July 27 2010, 00:27:26 UTC

That... is probably one of my most favorite scenes in the entire thing. XD I adore TegoShige jerking each other's chains. XD

<3

The Comment - chapter 4 beltenebra July 27 2010, 18:12:57 UTC

“Do you know how hard hacking into my drive is? Nearly impossible. It’s designed to be impossible to hack.”

E.P. looked like he’d just had his birthday and Christmas all rolled into one. “I’ve always wanted to try this,” he breathed.

::grin:: This is such a perfect occupation for Tegoshi, it requires just the right amount of bravado, reckless confidence, and love of puzzles.

I love, love, Love Shige and Tegger hacking together. He’d always been a theoretical man, himself, less into the actual run than in the theory behind it. It was why he and E.P. made such a great team - E.P. thrived on the challenge of the here and now while Shige’s analytical mind provided the base. But then they figured out what the data was and Shige wanted to run. They make such a fantastic team! <3

"Ah!" Koyama said suddenly. "I remembered! He's Tegoshi Yuya! He does those gritty underground simstims the media keeps going on about lately!"

Computer genius AND pretty little porn-star! Man, is he awesome, or what?!

No… Look, I’m just trying to save the ( ... )

Re: The Comment - chapter 4 sanjihan July 28 2010, 00:26:35 UTC

Man. I LOVE Tego the hacker. AND Shige the hacker. They are the perfect team and it's so pleasing to me.

Yes... Tegoshi IS teh awesomesauce. XD

I adore making Shige's life hard. It's so entertaining. ;)

I’m picturing that photo of him with the yellow headphones and his bangs in his eyes and all of the eyeliner...
I see we share a brain. XD <3

imifumei July 28 2010, 13:01:05 UTC

What don't I love about this section, yeesh.

The awesomeness includes, but is not limited to:

"say it or you'll be lording it over me for days" LOL

Pushy Tego always having his way with Koyama and Shige (yes, I meant to word it that way)

"Masuda better not snore." Awwww poor Massu

Waffles.

Passive-aggressive hairstyling FTW!!!!

I loved this chapter.

sanjihan July 28 2010, 18:13:59 UTC

lol. Tegoshi screwing with Shige always makes me happy. XD They just have such an interesting chemistry. :D And I'm so glad Cait helped me to get over my Tegophobia because he's one of my favorite people to write now. He's just so... interesting.

I also love cute Massu. <3

And Shige's passive-aggressiveness. XD

:D