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The Absence Equation - Chapter 9

Jul 25, 2010 19:58

Title: The Absence Equation - Chapter 9
Group/Pairings: NewS. Pairings: Koyama/Shige, Massu/Yamapi
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, cursing, sexual implications.
Words: 3,230
Summary: First try: "The fate of the world as they know it rests in the hands of one Kato Shigeaki. Oh shit." Possibly more coherent try (though it sounds like a lame old- ( Read more... )

c: shige, c: ryo, c: tegoshi, au, c: yamapi, p: massu/yamapi, r: r, #multi-chapter, p: koyama/shige, c: koyama, c: massu

Comments 6

lastingdreams8 July 27 2010, 21:53:40 UTC

“Oh ye of little faith.”
Biblical reference? Well, just a familiar line maybe ^^

Oooh, and the plot thickens. Is the A.I. screaming out for help, or is she the one behind the creation of the virus? Intriguing :)

sanjihan July 28 2010, 00:29:32 UTC

LOL. XD

Hmmmmmm, only time will tell. XD

snowaltz July 28 2010, 13:40:53 UTC

I'll have to read the rest tomorrow as it's getting late. But this is truly a work of a genius, I'm really impressed by what you've written.^^

sanjihan July 28 2010, 18:30:34 UTC

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest as well!

imifumei July 28 2010, 16:03:18 UTC

For some reason "his ass was rude" gave me a chuckle. Like. . ."yeah, the rest of him too, Shigs." I liked it.

Oh Ryo. . .I love that there is no universe in which you can escape your guitar and the longing to simply be with your music.

Pimp Massu is absolutely charming but, oh sweetness, I wish it didn't hurt you to have to do these things. I am sure Pi will understand.

Poor Rapunzel. Poor Tegoshi.

I just want everyone to have more time.

sanjihan July 28 2010, 18:32:35 UTC

Oh Ryo. . .I love that there is no universe in which you can escape your guitar and the longing to simply be with your music.
I... may have a thing for Ryo and music and I may be empathetic... >.>

LOL a charming pimp. XD