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The Absence Equation - Chapter 11

Jul 25, 2010 19:58

Title: The Absence Equation - Chapter 11
Group/Pairings: NewS. Pairings: Koyama/Shige, Massu/Yamapi
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, cursing, sexual implications.
Words: 2,500
Summary: First try: "The fate of the world as they know it rests in the hands of one Kato Shigeaki. Oh shit." Possibly more coherent try (though it sounds like a lame old- ( Read more... )

c: shige, c: ryo, c: tegoshi, au, c: yamapi, p: massu/yamapi, r: r, #multi-chapter, p: koyama/shige, c: koyama, c: massu

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lastingdreams8 July 27 2010, 22:21:04 UTC

Tegoshi spoke distractedly, “The psychology doesn’t matter.
Random, but I totally love when Tegoshi and Psychology are mentioned together XD

Might as well put it on the tab and hope he didn’t get whacked tomorrow night or the last loving he’d have would be his own. And what a hell of a way to go that was.
haha, so Ryo to think that :P

sanjihan July 28 2010, 00:31:18 UTC

I totally love when Tegoshi and Psychology are mentioned together XD
You and me both. <3 <3 <3

and I sort of really loved him in this fic and especially that part. :D

imifumei July 28 2010, 17:15:26 UTC

I loved the action with Pi. I totally don't buy him as being able to pull a lot of 1337 h4xx0rZ stuff off on the fly, but I love this "patient and methodical" kind of hacking for Pi. It's highly realistic. Like his business degree, I don't get a sense of business from him, but I believe that if he wanted to sit down and do it, provided it was at his own pace, he'd be able to excel with no problem.

Oh man. I seriously love Ryo in this fic. hehheh whacking. lol.

sanjihan July 28 2010, 18:36:12 UTC

Yeah, Pi presented a problem for me from the start, as you know. I didn't really know where he fit in, but he found a place. :D He's really interesting but difficult for me to write.

Dude. Ryo's parts were what kept me going, seriously. His snarky humor kept it lighthearted enough for me to not get too bogged down. I always looked forward to coming to his part.