Fic: Dreams, Crossover Leverage/A:tS, PG-13

[elebridith]

Title: Dreams

Author: elebridith 
Rating: PG-13 this part
Genre: Slash (the whole verse), Crossover

Pairing: Lindsey/Eliot, almost *g*
Summary: Set in my Face Value!Verse. Eliot POV before "Burn". Eliot really doesn't want this.

A/N: Beta'd by havenward , with idiomatic help from David. :-)

Comments

[honeyjojames]

*flails and awwwws and squeaks happily*
Oh wow! I can't believe how much you added to it! So freaking good! And so much better than before! I'm always surprised by how well these re-betas come out, and that was just wonderful! Well done you! (and Ginger and Haven!)
♥

[elebridith]

*bounces* Yay!!! I'm soo glad you like it!! :-))) So, you liked the dream? *smirks*

[honeyjojames]

*wibbles* Oh yes, I liked the dream very much! Now we just need Burn that you've been teasing me with forever! *pokes gently*

[elebridith]

*yelps* Hopefully next week! And... there are, um, extended scenes. *g*

[novae_ladyod]

I know, I know, comment is very overdue, sorry *hangs head and excuses a thousand times

[elebridith]

*beams* Your comments always make my day! :-)

I discussed the setting of Dreams with my beta, and given the ideas I had for extending the plot a bit, it just didn't fit anymore at its earlier place in the middle of Burn.

Mmm, fighting lessons... *ponders*

I think Parker teaching lock-picking would be her first try to make a sort of connection. *nods*

The dessert? In my mind Eliot did some simple but tasty dessert thing, maybe for a birthday or something, and Lindsey made orgasmic noises and ate three portions. It was hard to miss that he liked it. *g*

I guess Burn will be posted next week. I had to fix some issues (think randomly appearing and disappearing clothes *lol*) so it needs one or two more readthroughs. But not long anymore. I'll let you know. *g*

Thanks again!

[novae_ladyod]

O-M-G!! You’re trying to kill me, right?
Appearing and disappearing clothes?!
And: orgasmic noises? Thank you very much, my imagination worked overtime since your re-comment! I imagine Linds licking his fingers, the girls drooling and Eliot running off for an icecold shower… (and maybe some awfully nice Hardison comments too)

Now let’s see, what could be his sweet weakness? I don’t see him as chocoholic, hmmm… maybe pudding? Pancakes? Ice-cream?
This definitely begs for ‘The Dessert Job’
…. And isn’t it a good thing, Eliot knows how to talk Lindsey round? Whenever Lindsey is mad at him, all he has to do is cooking *LOL*

I’ll be good now (uh, as good as possible) and stop jabbering. ;)

[elebridith]

Clothes like in: paragraph one, he wears a jeans, paragraph two, they are naked, paragraph three, he pulls up his jeans. Oops! That's what betas are for. *g*

Well, I'm determined to have a scene one day where Eliot licks chocolate sauce from Linds' fingers, soo... maybe strawberries with vanilla pudding and chocolate-chili sauce, with a dash of liqueur? Deceptively simple. *nods*

Oh, I love your jabbering. *g*

[zortified]

*happy squeaking*

[elebridith]

*beams*