Fic: In Another Time (2/2)

[eldiablito_sf]

“So, Aramis,” Athos said quietly, hoping to keep his voice steady by lowering the timbre, “Maybe I can go in there by myself and see if I can make some inquiries.”  The stones of the parsonage of Roche-L’Abeille seemed to be laughing in his face.  Father, you were magnificent.  Athos shuddered.

“Oh right, like I’m going to let you

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[speak_me_fair]

That was so funny, and so them, and so over-the-top brilliantly angsty for NO GOOD REASON (because it's them)and then the LAST LINE oh God, you broke my heart for Aramis. And I was NOT expecting that.

WELL DONE.

[eldiablito_sf]

First of all, this ending is WAY better than my original ending that sucked because I was writing it AT WORK... Second, you should know by now that Aramis is actually pretty safe in my hands ;). I LOVE HIM.

Yay! I'm glad you liked it!

[speak_me_fair]

Yes but the fact I know you love him does NOT MEAN I TRUST YOU.

(see under: what I do to fictives I love for reasons why)

[eldiablito_sf]

Hah hah hah. Yes, well, fair enough.

He got off easy: he wasn't even the one who got called an "intransigent asshole" ;) and I gave him all the "best lines".

[quoshara]

Yes!! Bebe Athos! *LOL* I don't know who to pity more. Probably Raoul.

And Athos, that untrusting bastard - I have to say he has my complete sympathy, although like Aramis, I often want to bop him.

And poor Aramis - does the term Love's Bitch ring a bell?

Wonderful job, hon!! I loves it!

[eldiablito_sf]

*sticks it to own decrepitude :D*

Yes, I think we can all agree that Raoul is the MOST to be pitied. A lifetime of really unfortunate parenting is his! Unlike his two daddies here, he is INNOCENT.

I sympathize with the two fools simultaneously, and do not have the heart to separate them <3

[zoi_no_miko]

This is so completely perfect, babby. <3 I love the wanton lovings and Athos being a paranoid prat and falling in love with babby Raoul and the servants and the ANGST~~~ So lovely, so very them. XD

[eldiablito_sf]

Yes, biological imperative (and super sperm) are strong with that one! I am glad babby enjoyed! Raoul Auguste Jules de Bragelonne sends his regards to you and bemoans his name :P

[lurky_mcstalker]

Thoroughly enjoying this "moments in time" series you've got going. The humour you bring out through the snark is just priceless and so very them. What's important to the characters is that they get there in the end. What's important to us is that it's entertaining wathing them get there. It is a credit to you, my dear, that this is so. So hard to pick but I think this is my favourite so far.

[eldiablito_sf]

You're back! And thank you: it's always reassuring to know that a) I'm entertaining someone other than myself and b) that I'm not getting WORSE at doing this! :D

[aramirandme81]

I shall cast my wretched body down upon the weeping earth and worship at the altar of your written greatness.

...so if that didn't make any sense .. I L_O_V_E_D it.
The angst! OH the ice in my blood.
The insecurity, oh the overclouding of a forewarned doom!
The love...as bitter as the salt of he ocean and as sweet as the morning dew!
...and, yes I really need to stop reading my old poems before commenting on anything. lol

A follow up would be win. (even if it's "slightly" non-canon)

[eldiablito_sf]

Oh Wow. No one's ever thrown their wretched body down upon my altar. I hope you don't mind if I proceed to have my way with it? Heh heh.

Well, THANK YOU, I'm so glad that it apparently hit all the right buttons!

I don't know if you've noticed, but I'm very chronologically challenged, and all these have been written out of chronological order (and then put back in order on my "Mistress List"). So it's possible I already wrote a follow-up. *thinks* Nope. I only fast-forwarded 15 years into the future. That doesn't count, does it? (I am a total slave to canon for this series! Sorry! In my co-authored AU's I'll do ALL SORTS OF CRAZY SHIT THOUGH.)

[aramirandme81]

" I hope you don't mind if I proceed to have my way with it? " Nah.. go ahead...I'm easy. X-D

"In my co-authored AU's I'll do ALL SORTS OF CRAZY SHIT THOUGH.)" Uhh...I must check that out!

"Mistress List" = Love.

[eldiablito_sf]

Oh they're still WIP so not posted. However, it will take you a while to read everything by speak_me_fair and Quoshara, so you'll be entertained in the meantime! :D