(Taoris) The Pros & Cons of Overthinking (part 1)

[elaytheunicorn]

Title: The Pros & Cons of Overthinking
Rating: Pg-13
Word count: 7646
Summary: in which Wufan is a Greek god and Zitao thinks with his dick.

Comments

[grumpybiscuit]

"oh god the gay freak with the thinking complex just spoke to me - OMG Tao is so paranoid its so hilarious.
that if Jongdae had stayed there, that Greek god would have come to sit next to Zitao - this is epic!!! LOL

"Are you going to get on? I'm going to be late to my next stop," - I can so imagine the bus driver's face. =.=
And OMG Tao are you making yourself to look like a freak....

This is so funny. I love how miserable Tao is with his brain spinning 100 mph and how stalker he has become after that.
And d'awww to Kris for thanking Tao and make his dick alive again. Kudos to that...

[pollutedlungs]

I was literally crying laughing while reading this.
Why are you so amazing?

[wootaa]

this made me really happy because come on Tao is obviously the perverted one and then you're the second author I've read who writes this kind of Luhan/Tao love-hate friendship and it's sort of growing on me and then omg over thinking!Tao is literally canon so that's perfect and then LuTao conversations are love because no no no you have to guess oops did I just call Wufan's name oh awks and there's a second part and omg feels are coming out of my ears and I'm sorry this is such a long run-on sentence but if Tao thinks too much then I probably feel too much and yeah this is the result of that so yeah

sorry

[selayne]

Wow, I loved this. Probably because Tao reminded me of myself (- all the fictional dramatic stuff but yeah).
I think I mentally snickered through the whole thing, and I liked that it was awkward but not in this overly used cliche way but in an actually good way (idk how to explain it, but I have this love/hate relationship to awkwardness in fiction).
And now I'm going to stop rambling and rater read part 2 (and that I actually stopped to comment before reading the whole thing shows how much I liked it, just as you know)

[elaytheunicorn]

i based tao's character a little on my own personality but i think that overthinking is a problem a lot of people have?? haha ;;
but i'm glad you enjoyed it! tbh im a little embarrassed by this fic? because idk its really silly and cringe-worthy, but it's relieving to know that someone enjoyed it even a little. my biggest goal with this fic was to make people laugh so ;;
thanks for reading! ; u ;

[selayne]

Don't be embarrassed, it was silly in a good way :D

[heartereki]

my fav fic ever!!!!!!!!!!