Comments | elaineleyn: [FF] One on One

elaineleyn

[FF] One on One

Jun 07, 2012 02:41

Title: One on One
Characters/Pairings: KrisYeol
Genre: UniversityBasketball!AU, Fluff, Crack
Rating: PG-15 (for implied sex)
Summary: 4520 words. Kris and Chanyeol are rival basketball players from two rival universities. Outside the court though, is of a different story.
Translations**: Vietnamese | Russian
( Fic under the cut )

!fanfic, fandom: exo, pairing: kris/chanyeol

Comments 90

veiledstar June 6 2012, 20:22:15 UTC

KrisYeol as SGs was really surprising. I definitely expected them both to be PFs because of their height, but I guess Korea has really tall people ><;

Basketball fic is hard to pull off, and you did it really well! :)

If I were Chanyeol would've just fouled Kris for the possession before he got to the 3pt line >>; Maybe Kris isn't a good free throw shooter ;] big hands and all.

elaineleyn June 7 2012, 10:23:33 UTC

haha i like it how your comment is actually more of the technicalities of basketball. and you managed to point out the glitch i was meaning to hide! i was actually aiming for the PF positions (their height, like you've said), but then i needed kris for that three-pointer so yea, there went your assumption that they play SG. although hmm, i didn't really mention it, did i? but good observation!

and let's just say yeol was probably too nervous to even think about fouling kris? lol idek

thank you! i appreciate your comment. thanks for reading ;)

rimishi June 6 2012, 23:12:27 UTC

This was wonderful :) Thank you for sharing this fic

Krisyeol <3 <3 <3

elaineleyn June 7 2012, 10:24:33 UTC

oh no problem, thank you :D yay krisyeol!

grumpybiscuit June 7 2012, 00:42:30 UTC

Yeol is so cute...with all the posters and collections of Kris. Awwww.....and he worries for nothing.
And Kris, the wolf. Thinking about sex all the time. S'okay, as long as its with Yeol.

elaineleyn June 7 2012, 10:27:29 UTC

closetfanboy!yeol ftw~ :D krisus just screams 'sex god,' it's just appropriate idek /shot

thank you for reading!

yunhyukslover June 7 2012, 00:59:10 UTC

don't worry krisyeol fanfics are getting more and more.... read stupidrhapsody's krisyeol if u don't get disgusted with smut...hehehe it is well written also just like yours,
aside from may-december affair from my seme and uke i also love the hate and love relationship but not like this...hehehe
well written, kudos to you!!!!

elaineleyn June 7 2012, 10:31:47 UTC

me? disgusted with smut? hahaha reading smut is my life lol jk /shot oh, i like her krisyeols as well. but i've probably read everything krisyeol in lj already haha

thank you! :)

mainth June 7 2012, 01:44:44 UTC

Krisyeol forever!!! I demand a sequel for this, for the after-practice locker room sex hixhix.
The buzzer beat really makes me want to re-watch Yamapi's buzzer beat omg T.T

elaineleyn June 7 2012, 10:37:27 UTC

HOLY MOTHER did you just mention yamapi, my eternal ichiban from le jpop side? hohoho homg i just recently rewatched buzzer beat just for the heck of seeing yamapi in his pink basketball jersey.

trust me, i can't write smut to save my life. i would probably write them undressing each other and just within a wave of a ninja, they have climaxed already /shotdead lol but we'll see~

thank you for reading! :)

mainth June 7 2012, 12:28:41 UTC

Never say no to Krisyeol smut, you know. I thought a lot about who would be the dominant one between these two but it seems like Kris always wins lol.
The buzzer beat, you know? I know nothing about basket ball but watching Buzzer beat is hella exciting.
Kame, Jin, Yamapi are my top 3 from Jpop fandom lol too bad Jin getting married let me really down and i want to take a break from all of this T.T