Another fic

Oct 06, 2006 14:48

Flashfic written during English class. Yes, I am aware of the ironies.

Title: Between the Lines of Fear and Blame
Fandom: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle
Characters: Fai - mostly... mentions of Kurogane, Kamui and Yuuko
Prompt: 036. Smell
Word Count: 353
Rating: PG for blood refernces
Summary: Fai cannot escape the smell, no matter how much he ( Read more... )

fai, fanfic, angst muffin

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raven_goth October 6 2006, 19:31:45 UTC
oooo awesome-ly awesome. i love fai's very lust-ish thoughts ;P dont really know if what i just "said" made any scence but what i'm trying to say is i love this fic ^_^ (i suck at fic comments so bad)

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ekas October 7 2006, 01:24:51 UTC
Oooo... you are a new commenter... I must welcome you. *gives you cookies*

I'm glad you enjoyed it. At least my English class was not entirely wasted when people like the ficcie.

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anthology_on October 7 2006, 00:04:56 UTC
Love given to angst!Fay. That was well-writtenXDD

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evercool October 7 2006, 00:21:26 UTC
Thank you for writing delightful angst-muffin XD Be assured it was enjoyed. Heee~ Fai cannot resist the Kurogane~~ He smells like smeeeexxx XDD

He buried his face back against Kurogane’s shoulder and willed himself back into oblivion.

Ah, so sad. That's my favorite line/part tho X3

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ekas October 7 2006, 01:23:45 UTC
He buried his face back against Kurogane’s shoulder and willed himself back into oblivion.

First line written actually. ^.^; I knew I was going to end with this when I first came up with the fic idea weeks ago.

Heee~ Fai cannot resist the Kurogane~~ He smells like smeeeexxx XDD
Lauren said she wants to draw a picture of Fai licking Kurogane's back since he's still covered in blood. I have been trying desperately to convince her that this is in fact a good idea.

Kurogane's blood probablly does smell like sex to Fai.

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lexi_nyanko October 9 2006, 18:37:42 UTC
Loved it. This is so canon that even the CLAMP women should be jealous.

It reminded me of Anne Rice's theory on vampires: the sensation of sucking blood is so close to (or even better than) sex that people who become vampires lose the need for sex completely. (Many people tend to hate Anne Rice's "Vampire Chronicles" - I loved them. I love how that woman writes. It's just beautiful in a morbid kind of way.)

Fai is such a sweet angstboy. You should make him angst more - driving Kuro nuts in the process. :3

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ontogenesis October 18 2006, 15:06:35 UTC
Ah, how sensual. I like how Fai was feeling smug for having fooled Kurogane and Yuuko. ^_^

He does have a lot of self-control, though, to resist biting Kurogane. If he decides to be stubborn, he very may well starve himself to death.

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