Ficlet

[eiliem]

Title: Something Important
Character: mysterious character is mysterious? (or not, just experimenting with not introducing the character right away and seeing how long it takes people to get it?)
Rating: G

Comments

[elvenarchress]

somewhere between the first and second sentence I think XD Ace was the only person who had a confession moment afterall. He's such a moral-minded darling <3

With the Strawhats secrets generally come out after betrayalexposurebloodshedforgiveness and a lot of awesomeness.

[eiliem]

ahahaha - so much for "mysterious" XP

He's such a moral-minded darling

except when it comes to paying for food XXXPPPP

oh...oh my goodness o_o how have I written so much Ace!fic and not done a dine-and-dash already?! O_O

Oh god and now I'm going to have to write one! Whyyyyy brain why?

[elvenarchress]

cause you've been focusing on Angst!Ace and brotherhood fics? Not like anyone's been complaining. you're fics are wonderful.

Yay! a dine-and-dash fic! Can't wait :)

[eiliem]

Thank you.

[shayera]

Yeah, I got it between the first two sentences, too. Ace is the only character I can think of who's had a "He owes his captain the truth" moment.

But that doesn't make the fic any less lovely! ♥ I really love your description of emotions and how scared he is, and yet he can't make himself back out... Poor boy, and then Shirohige is awesome and doesn't care about stuff like that! :D

[eiliem]

Shirohige is awesome! &hearts

Poor Ace - don't worry! Your daddy will make it all better!

[eiliem]

LOL!!!

The poor baby - but Whitebeard will make all okay!

[ginnyvos]

I... Kind of figured it out during the first sentence? It worked well though, not saying the name. It's an interesting idea I'll need to see about experimenting a little with this as well.

I really really REALLY need an Ace icon

[eiliem]

lol - yes, get an Ace icon &hearts