Secrets (part 2)ishimuraSeptember 24 2010, 21:28:45 UTC
Kuzan finally reached his destination. Awkwardly with his long legs in his inebriated state he kneeled down and laid a hand on the wood, his friend's name written on the horizontal board. Just another act of treason in the eyes of the World Government in the long list he had committed and would have never thought of doing before of Ohara (like a flower bouquett for that very island). Not that it mattered here. Nobody knew of this place here except Garp and him now and Kuzan wanted it that way. It was just a tiny island in the ocean, nothing significant to be found here - except the body it hid from the world. The little, white cross was soon going be the only sign of whom had his last resting place here, after wind and weather and nature would have modelled the cliff's plane as if there never had been any person.
Kuzan let out a weary sigh. Tomorrow he would go back to his duties as Vice-Admiral of the Marines. Following orders, and morals, and the justice he himself had imposed on with. (Acting as if Saul had never existed).
Until then, he would mourn for his friend in any way the hell he wanted to.
His hand began stroking the cross. He let his eyes flicker close as finally some kind of peace settled in him.
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I'm sorry if I butchered Kuzan's character, but I think somewhere private after Ohara, he could have had a little breakdown due to Saul's death. Garp giving Saul a proper grave could also be the debt Kuzan has told about. Also sorry if the syntax sounds odd, I haven't written such a long (!) piece in a longer time.
Re: Secrets (part 2)ishimuraSeptember 25 2010, 06:56:44 UTC
Really? Thank you, though I admit I was right about the odd syntax (I wrote that in three hours), I'm glad that it's still good. And there are really too little Kuzan AKA Aokiji fics out there.
Mmh, given that I wrote this due Kuzan and Saul being in the row of memorable duo-friends in the OP world (them on the more tragic side), I'd say...
Duo - friends (like Pell and Chaka, Norland and Kagara, Brook and Yorki, Saul and Kuzan/Aokiji...)
Kuzan let out a weary sigh. Tomorrow he would go back to his duties as Vice-Admiral of the Marines. Following orders, and morals, and the justice he himself had imposed on with. (Acting as if Saul had never existed).
Until then, he would mourn for his friend in any way the hell he wanted to.
His hand began stroking the cross. He let his eyes flicker close as finally some kind of peace settled in him.
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I'm sorry if I butchered Kuzan's character, but I think somewhere private after Ohara, he could have had a little breakdown due to Saul's death. Garp giving Saul a proper grave could also be the debt Kuzan has told about. Also sorry if the syntax sounds odd, I haven't written such a long (!) piece in a longer time.
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Mmh, given that I wrote this due Kuzan and Saul being in the row of memorable duo-friends in the OP world (them on the more tragic side), I'd say...
Duo - friends (like Pell and Chaka, Norland and Kagara, Brook and Yorki, Saul and Kuzan/Aokiji...)
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