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jean_iris November 9 2011, 17:24:34 UTC
FINALLY. Seriously, I managed to give up hope for ever seeing this fic finished at least five times along the way xD But yay, you wrote it! <333

with all the noise it’s making, a five year old wouldn’t have problems locating it. Hell, even Ray could manage.

Aww, poor Ray, so underappreciated :P

Step three: kill. It doesn’t have to be nice

“Pardon me, dear sir, would it be a terrible inconvenience if I stabbed you in the throat right now?”

“Sure, homes, do you want to hear that in hendecasyllable?”

I would want to hear that xD

Having a mouth like that should be illegal.

And yet we are all grateful it exists

Brad shakes his head. “We’ll share a ride,” he says, the tone of his voice leaving no place for argument. “You’re just going to slow me down otherwise.”

Hello, one of my favorite tropes :D

“Yes,” he says, and if he hadn’t known it before, this is the moment Brad realizes he is well and truly fucked.

Mwahahaha, don’t fight it, Brad, resistance is futile :D

“Damn, I've heard of people having enough chemistry to ( ... )

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eiirene November 9 2011, 17:33:19 UTC
Seriously, I managed to give up hope for ever seeing this fic finished at least five times along the way xD
*scoffs*
I always finish! Sometimes it just takes me a long time to get there.

...that sounded better in my head.

This comment is all kinds of perfect too ♥

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jean_iris November 9 2011, 17:37:01 UTC
LOL xD Get your head out of the gutter...

...on second thought, don't, it's nice in here :P

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glitterglam13 November 11 2011, 23:16:00 UTC
This was wonderful. I loved how you wove the story and Brad and Nate's characterization. I'm not familiar with the book, but the 'verse was very interesting and it made me want to read all of the adventures Brad and Nate will have.

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eiirene November 13 2011, 20:03:30 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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pjvilar November 13 2011, 20:07:54 UTC
This is utterly delightful. I loved it.

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eiirene November 13 2011, 20:09:19 UTC
Thanks a lot :D

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whizzy November 26 2011, 05:32:31 UTC
Dang, I forgot to cheer over this after you posted it! :D It's so cute (Brad can't know I said that, but he is, even when he's doing his crankypants thing, and NATE), and it was great to see it finished.

\o/

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eiirene December 21 2011, 14:58:30 UTC
Dang, I forgot to reply :P
\o/ thank you! :D

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and_the_damned December 21 2011, 14:54:18 UTC
Absolutely loved this charming tale!

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eiirene December 21 2011, 14:58:51 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

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