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eglantine_br

As Seen from a Distance

Mar 06, 2011 16:36

Title: As seen from a distance

Author Eglantine_br

Word Count 1242

Rating G

Spoilers None

Disclaimer Not Mine

As Seen From a Distance

The storm had blown itself out and away. Tattered clouds streaked over the land, but to those facing the sea, the air was clear. There was always wind, at the waters edge, but today it was a playful wind ( Read more... )

fiction, archie/horatio

Comments 4

nodbear March 6 2011, 23:26:49 UTC

getting the boys on to a beach can never be a bad idea - amd it isn't here;)
an effective and lovely exploration of learning to revel in relative freedom

such a modest nose :D

nice also to see Horatio's horse - er being the one to misbehave..
thank you as ever Eglantine

eglantine_br March 7 2011, 00:29:44 UTC

Well. Anteros did say she wanted gamboling. (As opposed to gambling.)

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eglantine_br March 15 2011, 14:24:45 UTC

No. I mean he already has. I meant the gray haired man to be the Don. Thank you, by the way, for going back and reading past stuff. There is a terrible lot of it. I will happily answer any other questions you have.

bauhiniakapok August 25 2016, 09:05:27 UTC

I always hoped that the Don gave Archie parole after they all came back from the Indy, but it was sweet of him to give it here before they ever left. I wonder how Archie felt the first time he was able to walk free outside the fortress? Was it a little frightening?

I'm glad the Don knows their secret and is being sweet to them, even if Archie is too hurt to see it that way.