Comments | eggblue: fic: As Soon as the Storm is Over (Dean/Castiel)

eggblue

fic: As Soon as the Storm is Over (Dean/Castiel)

Sep 29, 2009 02:52

Fic: As Soon as the Storm is Over
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Fic. No sue me.
Warnings: Castiel POV, angel sex, Wincest forever
Word Count: 2,800
Spoilers: post-5.03, set in S5
Summary: Angels are masters of seduction, whether they know it or not.

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( Angels are not real. Demons are not real. Dean is real. )

dean/castiel, supernatural fanfic

Comments 12

olympia_m September 29 2009, 12:12:08 UTC

I am totally speechless because this was heart-wrenching and yet not and I should be more coherent, but i can't manage proper thoughts....

wow....

eggblue September 30 2009, 07:20:48 UTC

Oh! I like for Dean and Cas to be heart-wrenching and yet not - they deserve both :) Thank you!

moodswingers September 29 2009, 14:59:32 UTC

This is as dense as Castiel's true form. There's so, so much underneath, these words just a sublimation, a tip of the iceberg. You're seriously good, woman. ♥

eggblue September 30 2009, 07:36:03 UTC

And you are awesome and I forgot to thank you in my header *facepalm* I remember wanting to write first-person Cas months and months ago but I didn't think I could do it. So, THANK YOU :)

"Dense" fits Cas in a few ways... You know I can't talk about Dean/Cas coherently, but I could write them talking in circles forever. And they would talk in circles forever. Or until Dean lost his shit, whichever happened first.

spilled_notes September 29 2009, 15:33:59 UTC

Holy God.

Can I just tell you how beautiful this is? Actually, I don't think beautiful covers it. Your writing style just blows me to pieces. I am, truly, at a loss for words. This is so sad--sad is a flimsy word, it's more like, shattering--and so, so tragically gorgeous. I am just, speechless. I'm not a Wincester, I must say, but I still loved this so much.

Thank you, lovely, for posting this. :)

eggblue September 30 2009, 08:27:15 UTC

Oh wow, thanks for the awesome comments! I'm so glad you liked this - encouragement helps :) They're a tricky pairing, but I love to hear them talk.

twasadark September 29 2009, 16:00:38 UTC

WOW! Your Castiel voice is so otherworldly and vivid. An outstanding job here. I can really feel Dean's frustration, and how strange Dean is to Cas. Lovely work, sweetie!

eggblue September 30 2009, 08:37:02 UTC

Thanks! It's so cool the Castiel voice worked for you. I'm glad Dean's frustration came through too. It's fun to make him frustrated and have Cas just kind of wait it out :)

fannishliss September 29 2009, 21:22:16 UTC

I really love your way of speaking in Castiel's voice. It's not like anything else I've read before. I think you really get inside Castiel's thought processes in a genuine and unique way. I enjoyed reading it!

eggblue September 30 2009, 08:37:38 UTC

I'm glad it sounded like Castiel to you. Thanks so much!