Comments | eggblue: fic: To Change This Lonely Life, 4/4 [NC-17] Dean/Castiel, Sam/Dean, Sam/Castiel, Sam/Dean/Castiel

eggblue

fic: To Change This Lonely Life, 4/4 [NC-17] Dean/Castiel, Sam/Dean, Sam/Castiel, Sam/Dean/Castiel

Jul 21, 2009 15:42

To Change This Lonely Life, 4/4 [NC-17] Dean/Castiel, Sam/Dean, Sam/Castiel, Sam/Dean/Castiel

(see part 1 for disclaimers)

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( Part 4 )

slash, sam/dean/castiel, dean/castiel, sam/castiel, supernatural fanfic, sam/dean

Comments 14

fannishliss July 22 2009, 12:59:59 UTC

very tantric -_- Misha would approve!

I love the idea that Dean and Castiel save the world by making love -- that Dean is so good at loving the Angel because he's been practicing up with his brother! Dean is the perfect Human Lover and Castiel is the perfect Angel Lover.

I am all about demons being redeemed by sammy. That was a great idea to set the Trickster over Hell.

Your creepy emotionless boy Angels seem very in keeping with Show. It took me a while to figure out that Christy was also an Angel, but that being a girl made her a very different being. That's an interesting idea -- kind of science fictional in a way!

oh i just wanted to edit, to offer you my own story of demon redemption...
based on your story, I thought you might enjoy it. it veers AU halfway thru s4 tho! http://fannishliss.livejournal.com/12470.html

eggblue July 23 2009, 07:50:58 UTC

Oh cool! Thanks for reading :) It's always nice to know someone else likes my ideas. I'll totally check your story out (yay, redemption!) - thanks for the rec.

circlingdown July 22 2009, 15:38:34 UTC

Oh, I'm so sorry I've neglected you lately!! I run castieldean if you want to post anything there, you know I love your writing and it would be good to see it there too :)

eggblue July 23 2009, 07:56:58 UTC

ack! I know, I've been neglectful too. But thanks for the reminder about the comm - I get self-conscious about cross-posting anyway. I'll check it out :)

olympia_m July 23 2009, 06:59:03 UTC

oh, this was so very lovely *happy sighs*

eggblue July 23 2009, 07:57:20 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

olympia_m July 23 2009, 08:30:28 UTC

I like how your Cas is one kinky angel, really... :)

And Dean's sexual healing :):)

xxamlaxx August 2 2009, 08:10:10 UTC

I just need to say that Dean and Castiel saving the world by having lots and lots and lots of sex is the best idea ever. It needs to be incorporated into season 5. Lucifer can't possibly destroy the world when he's too busy watching Dean and Castiel go at it like angelic, horny bunnies. He can't.

Trickster thinks paper work is hilarious! Haha. I hope he also makes the demons have office Christmas parties. And a demon DMV.

you think Disney is evil.
Disney is evil Dean. You need to have Castiel smite it.

My brain is broken from all the sex. You owe me a new one. There is not a warning that accurately describes the hotness contained within this fic.

“I know, but what could you compare with a lesbian angel orgy anyway?”
Just....just yes. That's all I can say to that. Heaven is awesome.

Lovely fic overall. Dark, angsty, humours, sexy(mostly sexy, incredibly sexy, like sex sprinkled with sex wrapped in sex smothered in more sex).

eggblue August 9 2009, 05:17:05 UTC

Wincest will save the world. Kripke said it!

Ha, you know, for all the rewriting and revising I did, it never occurred to me that there might be too much sex in this story. That's where my brain is at - horny bunnies ! I blame the summertime.

Office Christmas parties where they play nothing but Neil Diamond and Barbara Streisand and have bad white elephant exchanges.

Castiel needs to proclaim that he will smite Disneyland. That would rule. Also, Dean giving him smiting orders. I LIKE that.

Hotness - score! Thanks :) You make me think of sex and donuts, which, really, wins forever.

xxamlaxx August 9 2009, 05:23:23 UTC

Kripke is such a fangirl.

There can NEVER be too much sex in a story. Trust me on this. I wrote a story once that had sex EVERY chapter and I still got people saying it needed more smut.(keep letting those horny bunnies in your brain breed, please, they amuse me)

*EL GASP* That really is hell. I pity those demons.

Castiel would do it too. You know he would. He'd wait until the park was empty and then it would just spontaneously implode. My little brother will be devastated.

Sex and donuts together? Or sex on top of donuts? Either way it's awesome.

orphan_project September 14 2009, 05:45:58 UTC

I really enjoyed this story. I like how they all came together in the end, and I like the way that you portrayed Sam's 'destiny'.

eggblue September 16 2009, 21:04:48 UTC

Oh, thanks for reading! This story was a little flaky, but I always want the best for Sammy :)