fic: MMOM #25: Dedicated to All Angels (Dean/Castiel)

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Title: Dedicated to All Angels
Author: eggblue
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Supernatural, Sam, Dean and Castiel are not belong to me.
Word Count: 3000
Notes: Dean and Cas and the bedroom, and Dean is very persistent when he wants a miracle. Post-post-4.22. A sequel of sorts to #24 Dedicated to All Human Beings, written yesterday

Comments

[moodswingers]

This was so fucking sexy, in the middle of all the funny and heart-warming.

I laughed out loud when Dean was afraid of chipping his tooth on Castiel's dick, and at one point I was a little afraid that Dean might come out of this injured. (It actually reminded me of the fact that Superman can't have sex with Lois because his orgasm would shoot right through her, lol)

Also, the dialogue was awesome.

[birddi]

Are you serious that Superman can't have sex with Lois? I've always wondered that but I never saw anything about it.

[moodswingers]

I'm pretty sure. Google it, I remember reading articles about it.

[eggblue]

I had to squee a little bit, because Superman/Lois is a favorite pairing, and the one that I was into right before Dean/Cas, so it's HILARIOUS to think my porny alien sex finally found its way into my angel sex fics. It didn't occur to me until you said so.

I totally know that Superman joke, but it's not really a joke I guess because Smallville seems to imply pretty strongly that Clark can't have sex with human women, and is in fact afraid to for that very reason. Cracks me up.

So thank you thank you! I'm working on two more parts to this story, and it gets even weirder.

[marcillac]

I've just finished to read it , weird reading to start the day ;) No it was my second reading of the day after a little story of a murdered woman who came back to haunt his lover (J.Potocki

[eggblue]

I read your comments about that story at Tina's blog. Ew! The part about the fat breaking through the soles of the feet *shudder*

Donatien is very creative, yes ;) Is it hard to picture what's going on when you read my stories? I wonder sometimes about clarity. I don't want people to get lost.

I know many men aren't into reciprocation... and some men are into it too much ;) That's why I like to write fic -- I can do what I want !

Oh I love Dead Kennedys!!! 'Fresh Fruit for Rotting Vegetables' is my favorite, I think 'I Kill Children' is on that, and 'Holiday in Cambodia' and 'California Uber Alles' - classic.

If you can think of a pairing you might like, I bet you can find fic for it. Before I slashed Dean/Cas I liked to slash Batman/Robin and Superman/Batman and Superboy/Robin. I like tributes to Superman -- it's fun to put him into sex scenes because he's so non-sexual as a character... but he REALLY REALLY could be ;)

Thanks so much again!

[marcillac]

Yes again me hi hi . I've just re-read you 'slash "3 Wings & Bathtubs' , it's been a while since I wanted to read it once again . I was listening to Jefferson Airplane very loud in the same time 'When the garden flowers baby are dead yes/and your mind is full of red/don't you want somebody to love ?/don't you need somebody to love ?/wouldn't you love somebody to love ?/you better find somebody to love' . The day is rainy .It was perfect

The picture of Dean taking his shower , drinking water will stay in my head for a very very long time ;) Cas's wings and the smile of Cas , thinking of it , Cas never smiled during the season 4

Of the 25 you have wrote , it's in my top 5 . I'll read the " 6 again , Dean as a kid in the pool because ir's an another of my favorite .

Thanx eggblue for the slashs . Okay okay I shut my mouth ! >>>

[eggblue]

Oh no no, keep going :D Honestly, I love comments, so I like what you have to say, always.

Jefferson Airplane + slash + rainy days = perfect!

I wish Cas smiled more too! He doesn't smile much at all, if at all. Just slightly hopeful expressions from time to time.

[horusguard76]

What a sad story.

Very interesting take on the angel/human relationship. Wish there would be more writers who approach the subject like this instead of all the fluffy or mind-blowing sex. lol

The first chapter was very confusing at the beginning, I had to read it several times because I believed that there were two perspectives or rather time lines. But I really liked the end, their discussion. :)

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Thank you! I do like the angst over the "i love yous" but I still believe they're in love. Eternal hope.

Tense and perspective trip me up the most, so I'm sorry about the confusion. I think it gets clearer as this story goes. Thanks for sticking with it.

[horusguard76]

Yep, some time into the story I got everything. Just the beginning was a bit rocky. ;)

(maybe get yourself a nice and helpful beta? Trust me when it comes to perspective an outsider can easily straighten things out, while oneself is kind of captured in everything. Happened to me as well. ;) )

And YAY to Love. :)

[eggblue]

I'm working on getting a beta for the story I'm writing now. It's a good idea to have one, yes :) I'm working on a J2 but I should get back to Dean/Cas next. They are my OTP after all... Love is love is love.

[marcillac]

I guess you are clear enough , is just that usually I read your slash in the car (and sometimes like yesterday I can't wait to read) and I have no dictionnary english/french with me , there is some words , sometimes , you use that I don't know . I guess I have some improvement to do again

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I'm impressed with your English. I really wanted to write a short short fic in French (perhaps about Rimbaud and Verlaine) for MMOM but I would have totally butchered the language, and to write about poets too! Oh the horror! But I'll try to find some phrases to use in the future at least. Some well-placed French might work nicely :)

I think it's race that's all about balance. I think we're both Libras :)