fic: MMOM #18: The Cult of Dean (1/3) (Dean/Castiel)

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Title: The Cult of Dean (1/3)
Author: eggblue
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Supernatural, Sam, Dean and Castiel are not belong to me.
Word Count: 1500
Notes: Post-4.22. Conversation fic where Castiel has his faith destroyed and wakes up naked in a hotel room next to Dean.
Part 2 here.
Part 3 here.

Comments

[moodswingers]

AH, this was AWESOME. I think it's your best MMOM fic so far.

The mythology part is amazing, and I love how everything came together. There's not a single superfluous word, and I love how easily Dean assumes the role of a caretaker, because that's what he was trained and raised to be. Little lost Cas is very, very cute.

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Thanks so much for the feedback!! :) I was hesitant to post this because I didn't think I could write dialogue, but I changed my mind when you didn't think this was awful. Whew! It gets all kinds of weird later, but I'm super relieved that I'm at least a little more comfortable with dialogue now. Pretty darn cool.

(I like your new icon. I saw the pic it's from at your LJ *fans self* (not that your icon is not all kinds of hot anyway). I just love cigarettes in icons. Just do.)

[moodswingers]

Dialogue makes any story so much more alive, and you got them just right, so don't worry, it really worked.

Man, I love cigarettes period, which is why it's unlikely I'll ever manage to quit smoking. Being an addict sucks.

But, I'm in love with this icon, too! :)

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Could you be more awesome? <3 <3

I shouldn't call addiction awesome, and it isn't, but I'm not even pretending that I'm trying to quit anymore. My goal today is smoking, cigarettes, pancakes, vodka & OJ, coffee, and porn, in that order. Perhaps some TV or a black-and-white film. Repeat. I'm loath to give up any of those things.

[eggblue]

Thank you! I usually remove all dialogue from a story because I think I'm lame at it. So I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading :)

[marcillac]

I loved this one , too . The dialogue is really cool . For me to say 'fuck' it's not a blasphemy , it's just to swear . Cas Cas Cas ... He needs a big hug !

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I agree with you about curse words not being blasphemy, but my Catholic school childhood taught me that every mistake you make is sinful so I still have that floating around in my head. Oh well!!! Hmm, wonder why I end up writing stories like these ;) Thanks again! ***hugs Cas***

[cherazz]

Absolutely beautiful! Dean soothing Castiel like that made me melt into a happy puddle of warmth <3 Bravo!

[eggblue]

Thank you!! Dean is puddle-inducing, isn't he? *smishes him* I noticed you're in on this challenge too -- cool!!! I am way behind on fic reading, but hopefully I can catch up soon. I've noticed you've been posting lately :)

[cherazz]

My pleasure! Dean and Cas are major puddle-inducers xD

I am having a blast with this challenge! I've been caught by the writing bug lately. I wish I could write everyday, but I think I'd exhaust myself by the end of May xD

I hope to catch up on reading too. MMOM is perfect for me =D Wanking rules \^^/

[marcillac]

Who wouldn't hug Cas , anyway ? Did I already say that I love his nickname ?

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*everyone hugs Cas* Did you see how they spell his nickname "Cass" in the scripts? Too cute.