The Gray Area

Mar 24, 2014 22:55

Pairing: Chanyeol/Kai
Rating: R
Words: ~5400
Summary: Chanyeol and Jongin live in two different worlds. It’s winter when the worlds meet, and it’s winter when they fall apart.
A/N: Heavily inspired by the song “Winter” by Mree and lightly inspired by two amazing and similar yet different books, 1984 by George Orwell and Brave New World by Aldous ( Read more... )

genre: drama, pairing: chanyeol/kai, fandom: exo, rating: r, genre: angst, genre: fantasy, length: oneshot

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rainbowpuppyhug March 26 2014, 06:28:56 UTC
Oh gosh, Jongin...
"“I wanted the Gray Area to be real as much as you did..." Ahh there goes my heart. But it was real, so real but so short lived and bittersweet.
This was really interesting to read! Thank you for the wonderful fic <3

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eexiee March 26 2014, 12:11:08 UTC
thanks for reading!

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chocomarijuana March 27 2014, 22:35:22 UTC
I haven't commented on fics in a long time, cause barely had time to read at all, but this time I have to.
Honestly, this was so beautiful I just can't really express it in words right now. Even though I wish it was longer, I think the way the events developed and how the mystery was still kept at the end just made it overall perfect. The plot itself is so good that I was picturing it as a movie in my head while reading. I loved the way you depicted Chanyeol and Jongin as ying-yang elements and how nicely their different worlds made them fit together.
Thanks for writing this and also, keep up the good work. ^^

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eexiee March 28 2014, 13:41:34 UTC
thank you so much! i'm really glad you liked it~

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biigbanng June 22 2014, 05:42:25 UTC
This was amazing and so beautiful. Usually by reading titles or summaries I get some kind of idea about the story or I think of things to expect. But I couldn't do so on this and it was brilliant.
I loved the way you split it, and how there were different storytellers in a way.
And the way they met and interacted, and how they inevitably fell in love and found their gray area ugh
I want to imagine a happily living jongin but I just can't /sobs/

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zephyr2008 September 5 2014, 02:38:29 UTC
This is amazing. I like the way you narrated the story. Very interesting.
I could see Chanyeol's and Kai's frustration toward the society they lived in and hope to find the said grey area. I wish this world will have the grey area for real too. It would be less pressure and more happiness.
Their love was bittersweet, yet true. I'm glad at least they found the one.
Thanks for the fiction.

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eexiee September 5 2014, 03:44:56 UTC
i'm really glad you liked it!! you seem to understand it well~ thanks for reading <3

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