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kyra_neko_rei December 5 2008, 19:05:11 UTC
*big grin*

I like this! Can't wait for the rest!

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eerian_sadow December 5 2008, 19:15:20 UTC
so glad you do. i can't wait for the rest either; this is the first multi-part fic i've written in a while that i don't know how it will turn out.

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tessombra December 5 2008, 19:11:50 UTC
This was so sharp and to the point, it generated that all important spark that makes Jazz and Prowl's relationship complete sense. Excellent piece!

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eerian_sadow December 5 2008, 19:14:33 UTC
thank you. i'm hoping that i can get the next five to work out this nicely. but of course, the second bit is being stubborn. i may have to skip injury and move on to one of the others in order to make progress.

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huntingospray December 5 2008, 20:20:21 UTC
This is a great beginning for Jazz and Prowl's friendship. I can just see Prowl reducing all his interactions to pure logic and Jazz being all contrary and needing to reach out to everyone even if they don't like him back.

*Settles down to wait for the next bit*

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eerian_sadow December 5 2008, 20:21:32 UTC
so glad you liked. i have a bit of inspiration tingling in the back of my head for the next bit now, so it might be up by the end of the weekend.

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gogglehead84 December 5 2008, 20:37:15 UTC
I want to see how this ones goes too :D.

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eerian_sadow December 5 2008, 22:27:08 UTC
hooray! i've hooked a new reader! welcome to my journal! please click my dragon eggs.

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gogglehead84 December 5 2008, 23:31:16 UTC
Thanks ^_^, and sure *clicks*

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eerian_sadow December 5 2008, 23:41:21 UTC
yay, clicks! thanks! also, the next installment of this is up.

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sister_dear December 5 2008, 20:41:15 UTC
Which was why it bothered him so much that the only mech who had bothered to visit him during his stay in medbay was Jazz.

I'd have read the whole thing anyway, but at that paragraph you had me hook, line, and sinker. Everything from there on out, just, YES. That's how it should go. Two thumbs up.

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eerian_sadow December 5 2008, 22:26:18 UTC
thank you! that one line is actually what spawned the whole little ficbit, so i'm glad that it really worked for you.

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