This Is How It Should Be.

Dec 28, 2010 00:41

Title: This Is How It Should Be.
Genre: Angst, Fluff, Crack (So freaking ironic LOL)
Pairings: broken!JongKyung, eventual!JongKey, hinted!2min
Rating: PG-13 for cursing
Warnings: temperamental!Jonghyun, bitch!Sekyung, too much fluff
Summary: This is how it should be.

A/N: This idea came about because of yesterday's hooha about the whole Japan concert ( Read more... )

genre: fluff, pairing: jongkey, rating: pg-13, ifanfic, genre: crack, pairing: jongkyung, oneshot, 2min, genre: angst

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jcqlnmarcos December 27 2010, 18:35:04 UTC
He remembered how when they were still trainees, and Kibum had a chance to perform as one of Kangta’s dancers in his concert. He remembered how Kibum made a huge fuss about it when he didn’t want to come and how he refused to talk to him for a whole week until he finally appeared at the concert as a surprise for Kibum, holding up an LED board that spelled Kibum’s name instead of Kangta in the whole concert hall. He remembered how Kibum missed a step when he supposedly saw the board and how he dashed to him and hugged him tightly when he saw him after the whole concert.
~I suddenly smiled and my heart exploded :')

Jonghyun beamed and aimed for one of his band mates. Minho gave him a death glare as if saying “If you choose Taemin I’ll make sure you don’t live to perform on the concert.”
~BWAHAHAHA XD I love it when Minho is overly protective and jealous :P

“Let’s break up,”
“Do I have to repeat myself? Let’s break up,”
~*throws confetti all around the world :))

“Kibum’s coming for meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,”
“Kibummie, you’re here!”
~drunk Jonghyun is really sweet :P

“Home, we’re going home. Come up, I’ll piggyback you.”
~oh crap. I am freaking happy :D

“It’s your fault for making me cold so hug me now.”
~I love drunk Jonghyun!!!!!!

“I don’t want you to sleep in another guy’s bed, even if it’s Minho,”
~I am exploding with fluff. I am not complaining :) I love Christmas!

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eejhan December 27 2010, 19:53:11 UTC
awwwwh really? I hope it exploded in a good way because I'll be happier cleaning up the carcass of your heart :X

I ABSOLUTELY ADORE OVERPROTECTIVE/JEALOUS MINHO! He's like the overprotective elder brother I want :D

kekekeke IKR :D If they ever announce that JongKyung is fake I will JUMP and SQUEAL and be high for the whole damn day :X

Drunk Jonghyun is like a kid here :D

This is like the first time I see a manly Key around actually :X I had to write him like that to do him a little justice :X

He's just using the fact that he was drunk and whine to Kibum as much as possible :D

kekekeke another affirmation that I can write fluff! I have to think of more fluffy ideas because I think I may run dry now :X

Merry Christmas to you too, and I love you because you gave me a long comment and I could return you a long comment as well :D <3

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jcqlnmarcos December 28 2010, 12:05:25 UTC
here you go, the remains of my heart :P you deserve it for making my heart explode with all the fluffiness of this fic :)

haha but in this case, he's not the older brother... he's the tall alien boyfriend of Taemin :))

drunk Jonghyun is such a sweetie! I would love to take care of him... or watch Key take care of him... whichever is fine by me <3

yes, I think Key can be manly as well and not in the umma mode all the time. he's sexy like yeah :D Key's personality is well-written in this fic :D

you can never run out of fluff :P but for me, someone who has a high fluff threshold, I am hard to please but you did a good job :D

yeah, my comments are usually as long as the fic? haha joke! I just tend to talk to much when I like the fic :P

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eejhan December 28 2010, 14:50:14 UTC
kekeke YAY I keep it now :X

HAHA YES TALL ALIEN BOYF :D I like that because I ship 2min too! :D

Me too! I'd like to try it out myself :D or I can take care of him together with Key because I picture Key like my best friend :X

Oh thank you with that compliment! I'm always a little worried about portraying the characters correctly because I try to put in a lot of facts to make it seem as realistic as possible :D Key is like my first real bias in SHINee, but not as crazy as I got with Jonghyun :X

ah I usually am better at writing angst, so I'm really a little afraid at writing fluff at first. But well, it turned out well the first few tries so I thought, why not? :D Yay major compliment again! :D Thank you! *bellybutton bow*

kekeke you see I also talk a lot. :X Thanks for liking this fic! :D It was really a spontaneous decision two days ago and I keep getting distracted from writing it the whole day ytd. Like when I finish the JongKyung break up I'm totally dashed. Then there was this whole portion that I took more than 3 hours to write because I get distracted the whole time but once I got through it to the JongKey parts I got fired up again to finish it like properly :D

I'm so chatty zomg :X

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jcqlnmarcos December 28 2010, 18:32:40 UTC
haha I hope you like it :P

I liked 2min before jongkey but I got converted easily. idk... I guess jongkey is magical like that :))

Key would be an awesome bestfriend! shopping with him would be like a party :P but yeah, I prefer having him as my husband :)) well look at me being ridiculous!

crazy about Jonghyun eh? he's too sexy, that's why. and his voice is woah! have you noticed that when he sings 'Hot Times' he's freaking effortless? damn that boy. o.O

I rarely read angst because I get too depressed that I actually cry like a mess so yeah :P but for you, I'll try :) I'll check your angst fics later :P

the important thing is you finished, sweetie! :) and you shared this fic with everyone :) it's really hard to write without inspiration or when you're distracted or lazy. haha I do that a lot :P but hooray for you because this fic was born despite the struggles :P

I can predict that we'll get along pretty well :P I like talkative people :)) I am extremely noisy in real life jsyk :P

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eejhan December 28 2010, 19:14:15 UTC
heehee I will keep it well :D I officially have the remains of your heart :D

I liked JongKey first, well because Key was my bias before Jonghyun and they are too obvious thereafter when I noticed SHINee a little more :X I only shipped 2min after I read JongKey fics since they are somehow always peppered with them :X

HAHA okay Key will be your husband and my best friend and Jonghyun would be my husband kekeke (fangirl squeals /slaps) it's okay we can be ridiculous together :D

Jonghyun... his voice is amazing, but honestly he has to work on his vocal stability more. The moment he dances or gets too excited his pitch goes off. In SM The Ballad he is more cautious since the songs are very much focused on vocals. Oh yes about that, SM The Ballad is 1 month old today! whee!

I'm quite irritating when someone watches live performances with me, because I can't stop pointing out mistakes :X I get really irritating or amused when I pick out a lip synched part too :X

But I really like Jonghyun because of his personality. Jealous boys (Y) and he thinks very differently (: okay I'm gonna go on and on about this if I continue hahahahaha.

Ah, okay, I cry a lot as well, but that was in the past. I'm not so affected by love stories now alr, unless like some that are really good. I'm more affected by family stories; I cry a bucket when the smallest thing comes up, being touching or sad. Believe me when I said I cried in Kungfu Panda, Bolt and Ice Age 3, if you've watch any :D

heehee yes! :D I'm somehow addicted to writing fanfics and reading comments from readers like you :D actually I love all kinds of comments so I make it a point to reply everyone :D I think I will be a good star because I give good fanservice kekekeke okay I'm not making sense. Yeah inspiration is very important to me, especially when I write songs. The chaptered fic that I have in my journal is actually like, 37 chapters long now in SFI (I didn't update here because it didn't feel much like a JongKey fic in a JongKey community) and it is not anywhere near ending so I need to sort it out first. I hope to finish by chapter 50 though!

HAHA yes I think so too! :D basically I can get talkative with anyone online, actually, but then when it comes to real life, I'm only really noisy with this other bunch of friends. I'm really extremely afraid of awkwardness and saying too much things that shouldn't be said so generally I lead a cautious life except for that bunch of idiots that say I'm noisy all the time, keke.

With my talkative/naggy nature people sometimes call me their mum, but I am now retreating and becoming a kid once again because I want to feel young and loved all over again *wide smile*

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jcqlnmarcos December 30 2010, 18:18:10 UTC
hahaha we are so cheesy, this should be a fluff fic :))

oh my, Taemin was my first bias then I found out that he's six years younger than me and that's just pedophilia so I kind of gave up on the whole idea. then Onew but then I watched Hello Baby and I saw how he is with Yoogeun so I changed my mind and found the love of my life KEY :)) LOL what is this :P and I only liked Jonghyun after I shipped jongkey :P you think 2min is real? sometimes I think OnTae is more feasible. sometimes. haha :))

OHMYGOD YES. I'll marry Key, you'll marry Jonghyun then we can spend the holidays together :)) I am seriously dreaming right now... haha :)) you and I can be cray cray together, yes?

I totally agree with you. He's awesome. Like seriously awesome. I think he gets too tired and strains his voice too much that's why it breaks and it's not lovely. yes, control is very important. and YES! he get's to excited :P I love SM The Ballad bec of him :D but rapper Kyu is really hot, too ^_^

HAHAHA we should totally watch stuff together. I comment on EVERYTHING that I annoy the people around me. and I go like, 'what? I am supposed to comment bec I saw something.' :))

I'm in love with Jonghyun's jealous attitude, too. I think it's sweet... but only in the right amount :P

oh dear, I haven't watched any of those movies you mentioned. I am such a loser when it comes to movies this year. school is ugh. haha :)) but yeah, I cried during Lilo and Stitch 2 when Stitch died and my baby sister was laughing at me. I cry about everything >.<

woah that's a really long fic you have :) *handshake* God bless on that one :D I got hooked on reading jongkey fanfics that I got inspired to write one day. but I'm really not that brilliant and I can only write oneshots :)) I tried writing a chaptered one and I'm stuck at chapter 3 :P

I am talkative EVERYWHERE :)) I think my friends get tired of me sometimes bec I like to talk nonstop :P but I'm trying to work on that right now :D somehow, I'm begining to appreciate being quiet ^_^

it's very tiring being the umma all the time. I used to be like that. now, I like to pretend that I'm not the umma so I can be free :))

advanced happy 2011 :D

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eejhan December 31 2010, 04:52:36 UTC
hehehehehe yes :X :X

Ah, you let your age slip heh :X I'm like 2 years older than Taemin so you're 4 years older than me then! :D My whole bias story is really long though! I first knew SHINee at Singapore E Awards (so lucky of me to see them live the first time I did) but I was rather anti-kpop then. I thought Onew was cute with his diplomatic leader skills and his eye smile. I disliked Jonghyun like, a lot, because he had a nasty face and I was pissed off and all "What's the problem with this guy?" but his voice did leave an impression on me. Then I watched Hello Baby with my cousin after the concert during the stayover at her house and got attracted to Yoogeun so I continued watching back at home, and found that Key was a very good dad, so my bias was sort of Key then. But I'm still not a shawol imo. It really happened during Lucifer, when my friend first posted a teaser and I was like, hey, SHINee, I know them, let's watch! And somehow it got me hooked and yes, Jonghyun's manly bareback made me salivate (omo sounds so pervertic) and I watched the MV again, and again, and again, and bought the albums and discussed on forums and joined a fanclub and wrote fanfics and now I'm a true blue shawol :D

Oh funny thing was that I didn't realise all the JongKey going on in Hello Baby when I watched it the first time(for Yoogeun) ! It was when I got to SFI then I was like, why is there an couple option? And I chose JongKey since they were my two favourite members. And after exploring the thread and fanfiction communities, yes I am now a big time JongKey shipper :X I only shipped 2min after JongKey fanfics but I kind of like them together because theres a guy and girl in the relationship like JongKey (:x). Sometime OnTae is cute too but I can't find the guy and the girl so it's more like best friends/brothers to me :D

HAHAHAHA wheee I like that idea! :D they'll be best friends and we'll be best friends too kekekeke :D Crayzehhhh tuuuugetharrrr :D

He doesn't know how to take care of himself! Like his leg injury, it's not totally recovering bt he still can't resist dancing a little at times. When he dances during the Gayo Daejun shows I'm like, DON'T DANCE YOU STUPID! And my brother says I'm like his mum -.- I prefer to think of it as a very concerning girlfriend :X My friend doesn't really like the tone of his voice because she says it's too piercing and she thinks he's the worst amongst the 4 singers in SMTB. ): But it's okay because I love him all the same and all of SMTB are all different kinds of singers! I'm just really happy for Jonghyun because he gets to sing what he wants to :D I'm guessing he likes Hot Times and Don't Lie because it's kind of what he likes :D Kyuhyun is sort of my bias in SuJu, but I don't exactly follow them. I watched him sing once in SGB and I'm like, wooo this guy can sing :D

KEKEKE That's exactly what I think! My parents and brother always give me dirty looks when I do so, but yeah, I think that I should say it! Imagine if I meet Jonghyun finally one day and I tell him, You need to improve on your vocal stability. HAHAHA he will be like, are you really my fan? But I bet he will be intrigued too :X Sounds crazy but I sometimes think I can guess his thinking and feelings. :X

Heh, I love jealous guys, like mainly jealous boyfriends so I am really injecting the jealous element a lot in my fics :D even 2min, my Minho is a freaking bucket of jealously :X But I think jealous Jonghyun is still my favourite ever, :x maybe because I haven't met a jealous boyfriend yet to know how is it like to have a overprotective/too jealous boyfriend? :X

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eejhan December 31 2010, 04:53:11 UTC
Ah, it's okay, I'm watching lesser and lesser already. I didn't watch Lilo and Stitch 2! But I guess I'll be crying buckets if I watched it when Stitch died. HE DIED?!?! noooooo he's such a dear! I cried like mad when I watched Marley and Me, only because I read the book and know what's gonna happen and started crying long before Marley even died. :X

Yes me too! I read so many JongKey fanfics and I'm like, hey maybe I can give it a try :D I usually write without thinking so I write a lot. Like this oneshot stood at 12 or 13 pages in microsoft word, really quite long for a oneshot isn't it? I originally intended to end at 20 chapters but now... I'm at the second season since Jonghyun got together with the female lead first. :X It's okay you can just write slowly! :X As long as I'm not posted anything I'll feel a little less stressed out because I don't have the pressure of updating. I'm taking a break now though, cos it's not going anywhere. :X

HAHA it's good like this! I hope I don't put across an image like a hypocrite since I really care about my verbal and character-al image. It just happens that I talk more comfortably with another group of friends and I also talk really differently online. :X Yeah sometimes being quiet is the essence of everything. I'm learning to listen to other stuff when I'm quiet too! Or else it would just be me, and singing. :X I'm a rather good listener in my opinion though! :X

HAHA, it's the same for me! I'm gonna be like the kid and let people take care of me now instead of me doing it all the time. Sometimes it's just not quite worth it because people take it for granted. :/

Okay this is getting ridiculous. I'm talking too much; so much that I have to split my comment into two parts :X

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jcqlnmarcos January 9 2011, 14:42:09 UTC
you're part of the '91 line then? like Key :)) haha it hurts to discuss about age bec I want to marry Key and I'm older than him so... :( but yeah I move on right away :P bipolar :))

ohmygod you saw them live already?! OTL I hate my life. haha :P I am so jealous! hmmm maybe it's bec of the whole blood type AB thing with Jonghyun. they claim to be very weird, like Heechul and Yesung... not really approachable-looking :P but yeah, his voice. I just can't say NO to that voice. if he tells me he needs to kill me, I don't think I can protest :)) waaaah YES YOOGEUN is an addicting candy. when I watched Hello Baby, I did not like SHINee... I like Yoogeun bec he was just too adorable! his cheeks are poisonous o.O my gosh, Jonghyun's bare back... I can't stop staring at that, too... it's very distacting when you're watching the MV... yes, it brings out pervy thoughts... haha :)) same with Key's half-shaved hair and Taemin's long sexy hair... I was having a hard time bec I don't know which one to stare at so I have to watch the MV once for every member :P

OMO me too! I didn't know about jongkey back then! I knew about 2min in Twitter bec of the fanbases but I found LJ and read like everything I can find about jongkey and I got converted :P I didn't know about the jongkey comm back then so I used to search endlessly. haha talk about a late bloomer :P jongkey is just too real not to be shipped hard. 2min is acceptable for me bec it doesn't involve cheating!jongkey :)) lol does this make sense?? what I'm trying to say is, I don't want Jonghyun and Key with other pairings... lol I suck at explaining :P

I love this. let's be crazy in our own little world. and let's take Jonghyun and Key with us. :D

I think he's depressed that he can't dance still! that's why he just can't help him. waaah sometimes I get too worried about him, too. like, he got injured a loooooong time ago and he still can't dance. what the hell happened to his ankle??? =S it's okay to be the extremely concerned gf... it's sweet :D I love his effortless awesomeness in SMTB. that last note kills me everytime o.O

I am an ELF, too! actually, I am an ELF first before I am a shawol :) I kind of got to know SHINee bec of Super Junior. Donghae is my bias :P Kyuhyun is really awesome, too! his voice NEVER breaks. it's flawless :) you picked the right bias :P

I don't think it's crazy. maybe it's bec we keep up with their scheds and we watched all the reality TV shows that they became a big part of our lives that sometimes it feels like we're really friends with them? again, I am not making sense. I think. haha :))

haha I've heard that jealous boyfriends are a pain that sometimes it's not even cute anymore. I really don't know. NBSB :P

woah I haven't watched Marley and Me... and I am so ashamed bec I love Jen Aniston bec I'm addicted to F.R.I.E.N.D.S. :P I didn't know that one was from a book! hmmm I might give it a read :)

damn your fic has a season 2 :) I am so going to read that :P update me, okay? I really LOVE long fics! :P

I am so frustrated. I don't think I can continue to write that fic of mine. the inspiration is all gone now. huhuhu maybe I'll just stick to oneshots. some authors are like that and then they just do sequels. haha less pressure, I think :) it's helpful to take a break sometimes :) so you can find the right inspiration :) and your brain would work better if your well-rested :) my fics are more of eureka moments when I'm bored... they just come to life :P

definitely NOT a hypocrite! every person is unique and should be appreciated :) haha singing most of the time? I really think we would

get along well :P that's me, all day :)) sometimes I feel like if I don't sing, my life is so boring. it's an essential part of me :P but yeah,

when it's time to be quiet and to listen, my brain cooperates :) from what I gather, I feel like you're a really good friend, too :)

yeah people take it for granted or abuse you... I hate that. sometimes it's easier not to care but it bothers me too much that I give in eventually

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eejhan January 20 2011, 03:15:25 UTC
yup I'm a 91'liner! :D It happens that fangirls or maybe just shawols are getting younger and younger. I've met an 11 yr old shawol on SFI before! It's okay, hahaha, I'm sure he don't mind! :D bipolarity is <3!

Yup, saw them live the first time I knew about them, well I didn't even know at first, it was my cousin who wanted to see them! I wanted to see yoga lin :D Nah it was more like the fans were a little too aggressive? I don't know if that was his real feelings but he did not even smile. And yeah I was rather put off like that. :X Haha yes, I know. His voice is really damn awesome, somehow as a singer you can feel his emotions portrayed. I think it's this factor that made me like him more even though I don't really like his tone. Oh no that's very dangerous! I'll keep him away from you like 1 metre distance and conduct a body search every day to make sure he don't bring a gun. :D Me too! I didn't like SHINee when I was watching Hello Baby :D Okay I need to keep my drool to myself :X haha my eyes was attached to Jonghyun :X I didn't really like taemin's hair? although he looked good in it I felt it made him so much like a girl! D:

As a very late shawol I fell in love with them in the Lucifer era, but when I watched back everything from the start, I realised how horrible was it that they 'grew up' in a span of a few months. When I watched Hello Baby it was Ring Ding Dong era, and they were still like teenagers but a few months later, they changed into men. Honestly everyone looked too mature in the MV. Onew looks 30, Jonghyun looks 25, Taemin and Minho looks 23, 24, and Key could look 19 or 26 due to the hairstyle, imo. The contrast is too huge... I rather they kept their boyish image. They are not really that old too...

Yes, JongKey is pure love that cannot be ignored. I fell in love with them easily with the pictures and rewatching of Hello Baby! :D hehehehehehe me too! I approve of 2min because 1) They look cute together, 2) there is a guy and a girl in the relationship and 3)they don't interfere with JongKey and 4) OnChicken is pure love. :D

hehehehehehehe I don't mind just talking like this a lot! :D

Have you seen this? http://wtfswrongwithme.tumblr.com/post/2762039494/unconfirmed-rumor-translation-shinees This is my own translation so it's probably more accurate? I think that stupid boy won't just be depressed and cry about not being able to dance, since he don't really like dancing anyway. I would see it as he was apologizing for all the other stuff that fans probably don't know. Actually I've discussed with the fellow shawols in Singapore about his injury, and we can't help but to speculate that it may be fake. It's not an ankle injury! It's much more serious than that - he tore his ligament. But my friend who is familiar with sports injuries say that tearing the ligaments is not funny, so it's the best to rest fully. Another friend's dance senior tore her ligaments and took her 4 months to recover, :/ hehehehehe I'm a self-proclaimed girlf so Sekyung can stand one side. :X HAHAHA I'm really happy for him in SMTB! Look forward to the next album although that would mean another hole in my pocket. :X

Hahaha yay! He's not exactly my bias since I don't know anyone better. So he's kind of the only guy I really heard and remember him singing. :D I'm a sucker for awesome voices. :X I think that Eunhyuk is ridiculously funny and Leeteuk is awesomely caring, not forgetting diva-ish Heechul, hahaha. I've heard for Super Junior before I liked SHINee but I was a very biased person when it comes to K-pop. You could say I was like an anti, not of SuJu but more for K-pop as a whole. But damn, SHINee and Jonghyun changed me around. I really like how they are real on TV and hardworking!

I'm so glad someone understands how I really feel! I know it's not exactly right but I sort of put myself on top of the 'fan' status for Jonghyun, knowing him at a mental level and feeling a connection. Well, I've never knew him irl, but then, isn't this like all school crushes? You know how the person is like, and you like them because of that, and yet you don't know them personally. He's a big part of my life now, and really, he makes me smile at any time of the day.

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eejhan January 20 2011, 03:16:18 UTC
A certain level of jealousy is okay for me? I'm someone who really likes how I am important to someone so I think I can deal with jealousy. Jonghyun is a jealous idiot too! :X

Woo, watch it! It's awesome haha, but prepare tissues if you tend to cry a lot. Ah Jen Aniston is really pretty :D Forgot who was the male lead but he's quite big in the industry too? Yup read it! It's a good read :D It's with the same title by Josh Grogan. I loved how he wrote it because it is very realistic and well, heartwrenching. One thing about stories that revolves around an animal is that you can prepare to cry as they almost always die in the book. :X

Yeah season 2, :/ Season 1 is unjongkey and I stopped posting in LJ because of that, so they are all in SFI and I'm a little lazy to update in LJ. :X Okay, hahaha.

It's okay to have some writers' block! And before I got around writing my ridiculously long ff, I wrote a lot of stuff and stopped halfway too! You may not believe it but that was my first SHINee fanfic, and my first attempt at English novels as well! :D I find oneshots a little harder to write because I think it would be a pain to read very long oneshots but I can't help but to write a lot like this fic. D: Yup, there's less pressure as well! I wanted to complete my YongSeo part to my other oneshot series but I still haven't got around finishing it yet because it is just so incredibly long already, standing at 18 pages in microsoft word and it is not even close to finishing -.- Oh it is so not possible for me to bored right now! I am currently drowned with assignments and my final year project is in it's last stages of completion but I'm still kinda working around it, :/

Haha, thanks! I just act really differently around different groups of people and environments. Heh I sing too much actually, on the trains and such. My friend said he won't be surprised to find a video of me online soon :X Yay I think we would really get along well! Where are you from anyway? I'm from Singapore, so if you ever come over for a holiday, I could bring you around or something? :D

Hehehehehehe I've been told I'm a good listener, :D Part of me I guess? When I talk a lot I listen a lot too, but yeah I'm getting quieter recently, or maybe just in some places. :D

Yeah, oh well, this is life. The person that cares loses out the most. But friendship and life is not about profit and loss so I doubt I would change my way of handling friendships, but maybe just a little more careful. Hehehehe thanks! I'm sorry for the late reply too! I saw your reply and I replied everything almost immediately but then... I forgot I didn't have internet connection until I hit the Post Comment button and thus, everything was gone. D: This page has been open since forever (means I haven't shut down my computer in ages) and I have been busy/lazy to finish replying it because I don't know what I've said and what I've not. :/

Damn it's another two page comment. :X

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