The Ex Factor - Chapter 17 - Inside Out
Story: The Ex Factor : Edward & Bella
Update: Chapter 17 - Inside Out
Rated: Mature for Language, Mild Violence, Drinking/Illegal Activity, Sex, ETC.
Pairings: Bella & Edward [soon], A/J, R/E, Jacob/Bryan, etc...
General Spoilers: None aware of
Story Breakdown:
What would you do if you got a second chance with your first love?
Edward Cullen & Bella Swan are exes who were once in a beautiful and growing relationship. On the eve of the day they planned to tell each other how they TRULY felt, unplanned events took an extreme turn to the south, and things ended on a hurtful, sour note. Though they are still in-love with each other, even four years later, they are stubborn and cannot admit their feelings, and treat each other like crap to keep their hidden emotions at bay. Now, fate as dealt them another hand of cards, and when they get stuck in the same atmosphere together, they are forced to discover each other again, hash out the past, and expect the unexpected. Because love is a force to be reckoned with... especially when it comes out and bites you in the ass. Twice.
NOTE: Story Art, Character Map, Breakdowns, Sneak Peaks, and Links all BEHIND the link.
Chapter Breakdown:
Chapter Seventeen: Part 2 of the night.
The reality of Edward’s actions comes to him when he faces Bella, and he becomes overwhelmed with what really happened to her in her past. Instantly, he tries to heal her -- and possibly his own actions -- by showing her how much he wants her. He wants to show her the good side to intimacy: The loving kind.
The rest of the gang also experience sex, whether it be the right time or not.
Note: I really wanted to go through the different emotions and feelings that each character could be feeling with a physical involvement. If someone is longing, if someone is new at it, if someone is angry or resenting something... If someone is scared of being in love and then losing that person... Sex can be taken into all these different levels, depending on the emotions felt.
Chapter Spoiler/Sneak Peek:
BELLAPOV
I gently dragged my legs along his sides, trailing our heated bodies, skin to skin. My fingers flourished tenderly through his hair, and I could practically hear the strands whispering through my fingers like the breeze right before a wind storm... delicate but powerful.
Mesmerized, I watched every single feature of his face in the candlelight...
The way his diamond green eyes were glossed lustfully but still aware... very tender and endearing...
How his tan cheeks were flushed from the heat between our bodies...
How his forehead crinkled and then relaxed with our movements, creating a slight layer of dew and dampness...
How his bronzed hair shined with every spring of my finger...
And how his pink lips, swollen with passion, were slightly parted so he could take us all in...
Not to mention that powerful but delicate tongue of his, bouncing lightly on the inside of his lips when he'd breathe...
Sometimes his mouth or his chin would literally quiver, but he never kept his eyes closed or took them off of me for long. He always came back to me.
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