I admit, I didn't realize he was meeting the other pilots until the second scene. The 5 should have tipped me off.
I liked these, interesting ways to have him meet them. My favorites were Duo's (XDDD) and Quatre's. Quatre's had a moment of deeper connection that was quite intriguing.
He makes me emo in the last scene, with his missing Odin. Woe, Odin. ;_;
(... the lack of realization comes from glancing very quickly at the warnings instead of actually reading them, because I read almost everything you post anyway and, yeah, okay, I suck. XD;;)
"Perfect! I know once you post another GW fic, it'll be as good as the others you wrote before. Kudos! It almost felt like an Episode Zero outtake, one that can easily come with Relena's Act (a little!Heero dead ringer appeared there, right?). I love the kid's encounter with Quatre and Duo the best--there's an amount of cuteness in them that doesn't spoil the flow and the atmosphere of the story. Good idea with the Trowa snippet (and I'm looking forward to read a separate baby!infiltrator!Trowa if ever you'll write one)! There's something in this line that made my hair stand on end: "Dr. J and I have this in common: we’d both like to know what it would take to kill me." The whole Dr.J snippet is written just the way it should be. I hope you write more!"
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I admit, I didn't realize he was meeting the other pilots until the second scene. The 5 should have tipped me off.
I liked these, interesting ways to have him meet them. My favorites were Duo's (XDDD) and Quatre's. Quatre's had a moment of deeper connection that was quite intriguing.
He makes me emo in the last scene, with his missing Odin. Woe, Odin. ;_;
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Oooo, creepy! I think I love the anonymous bonding with Trowa the most, although Quatre talking to the universe is always good!
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THIS LINE FASCINATES ME. It offers a new perspective, and I LOVE IT. *___*
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"Perfect! I know once you post another GW fic, it'll be as good as the others you wrote before. Kudos! It almost felt like an Episode Zero outtake, one that can easily come with Relena's Act (a little!Heero dead ringer appeared there, right?). I love the kid's encounter with Quatre and Duo the best--there's an amount of cuteness in them that doesn't spoil the flow and the atmosphere of the story. Good idea with the Trowa snippet (and I'm looking forward to read a separate baby!infiltrator!Trowa if ever you'll write one)! There's something in this line that made my hair stand on end: "Dr. J and I have this in common: we’d both like to know what it would take to kill me." The whole Dr.J snippet is written just the way it should be. I hope you write more!"
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If you check the top entry on this LJ, it links to all my GWing fic, in case there's any you missed. Though I think they're all on FFN.
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