Cookies (Gundam Wing)

[edonohana]

Fandom: Gundam Wing

Comments

[tarigwaemir]

I like how Duo is (apparently) saner than Heero but still knows how to reason in a way that Heero can understand. I also like how this ends...Heero still awake, still tense. Duo reaching out to him can't and doesn't solve his problems all in one go.

[edonohana]

Thank you very much! (Belatedly.)

[askerian]

... *o*

My god. I'm amazed. They're perfect, so in character it hurts. How Heero is messed up, and Duo too in more subtle ways, and the dysfunctional way they deal and -- ahhhhh. Duo trying to help Heero a bit, for so many possible reasons -- maybe one, maybe all of them, and Heero of course thinking it's manipulation to make him useful-- I love it. It deserves a better review but I can't kick my brain in gear. But the vivid in-characterness and interaction, oh god. yes. yesyesyes.

[edonohana]

Oh, thank you so much!

[rilina]

I really liked this, especially how Heero both does and does not recognize what Duo is trying to do. I can imagine Heero twitching at Duo keeps talking and talking...

Also, the bit where Duo lists their respective accomplishments totally made me laugh.

[edonohana]

This is so belated, but thank you! (I like how the whole "what Heero thinks/what the reader sees" thing turned out myself.)

[gaudior]

Oh, very cool. More coherent comments later (I hope), but... I like. Grin.

[edonohana]

Thank you! (Feel free to add coherent comments on anything any time (or not)... You see how long it takes me to comment!)

[marith]

Wow. I still haven't seen Gundam Wing, but this stood on its own nicely.

[edonohana]

Wow, I'm flattered. Thanks!