I really liked some the imagery (Kankurou putting on his makeup) and the beats of the conversation (Gaara's “I don’t still have the teddy-bear").
Also, am reading this during my lunc hour--and am stifling my laughter at Gaara and Kankurou's conversation because I don't want to attract unwanted attention from coworkers. But hee!
Argh! Are you caught up to the timeskip arc yet? I hope I didn't totally spoil you for it by writing "chapter 180" when I meant 280! If so, I grovel in shame and sorrow.
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Also, am reading this during my lunc hour--and am stifling my laughter at Gaara and Kankurou's conversation because I don't want to attract unwanted attention from coworkers. But hee!
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I knew I had to write this when I thought of Temari remembering the teddy bear.
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I love the conversation with Kankurou ^^. Very well written.
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