FFVIII: Timeline - the game

[edenbound]

Fandom: Final Fantasy VIII

Comments

[lassarina]

I've read bits and pieces of this before, but I've only just now read the entire thing, start to finish, and I have to say...

Bravo.

The thing I like best about this - and the thing that many BDSM writers just blatantly miss - is the fact that Seifer is incredibly aware that while he directs the game, Squall and Zell have all the control. He's aware that while they let him direct them, control them, control their reactions, they always have the power to stop it.

So well done. So much hotness. :)

[edenbound]

Thanks! I love writing this arc because all the control issues and stuff are just so interesting to write about and deal with. It started off as random porn and then got to me really exploring the Seifer/Squall/Zell relationship. And it really is fun to write about.

Although you haven't read all of it yet 'cause I just posted a new bit. :p

[lassarina]

*squeals and goes to read*

[edenbound]

There's been three new bits, even. xD I've been productive today.

[cynbaby]

You know you should submit this to BND's smut contest. ^_^

[edenbound]

Took me a while to find out the submission stuff. ^^; Would I be able to just submit with a link to this post or do I have to put it all into .txt/.doc files?

[cynbaby]

submit a link with the post and we'll go from there. Just make sure to include the rest of the contact info. ^_^

[edenbound]

Sent an email like it says on this post of the LJ community. Now watch me get stuff wrong. xD

[dinosaurs_alive]

I never read anything like this, honestly. I've never even thought to. And let me just say that was one of the most fabulous arcs I've ever read, hands down. You have the best prose style, you're completely in control of every word and it all means just what you want it to. It's so hard to find authors who know what they're doing, but you definitely do, haha.

Love your writing. Love love love. ♥

[edenbound]

Thank you very much. ♥ I love writing this arc and it's great to get more and more people saying they liked it. xD At first I got a flood of "omgthisistoofuckedup!". ^^;

[silver_argento]

I just read the whole arc in one sitting, and OHEMEFFGEE, that is hot. I'm not too big into BDSM fanfiction, simply because a lot of writers seem to know nothing about the complexities of that kind of relationship. (one of my best friends is in one, hence why I know so much about it) But damn, you've got it pinned very nicely.

'scuse me while I try and un-gooify myself.

[edenbound]

Hee, thank you very much. ♥ I'm glad to know I have it pinned, since it's mostly the product of research. xD

[edenbound]

Thank you for commenting at all. ♥ Well, commenting positively. I can do without flames. xD

I'm glad you mentioned that one. I was afraid people wouldn't like it. xD

Thanks again! ♥