I need a beta!

[ebonymusic]

[NOT SCRIPT] My first scene is basically a total blackout and then Memory strolls on, illuminated by a lone, sharp spotloght. She then says a few lines, a general thing, no mentioning names. It should foreshadow what's to come. Blackout again, and then lights up on Andy and Rod's apartment and they have a scene (which is the second one.)

The foreshadowing should include the title which is Should Tonight Come Too Soon.

I wrote the lines for Memory but now they're awful and I'm rewriting them completely. But first I need to search for a beta to de-shit my work. Hopefully.