Comments | ebonyfeather: A Close Call

ebonyfeather

A Close Call

Aug 23, 2010 20:54

Fandom   - Primeval / Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Pairing     - Connor / Spike / Lester
Rating      - R-15
Summary - Spike gets hurt protecting Connor.
Series      - # 6 in the Connor / Spike / Lester series- full list here.

( A Close Call )

connor temple / spike / james lester, fiction: slash, fiction: threesome, tv: primeval, tv: buffy the vampire slayer, fiction: crossover

Comments 16

deinonychus_1 August 23 2010, 21:26:21 UTC

Yey! You wrote more of this ficverse! I love the hurt/comfort, and Connor cutting himself to feed Spike, and then everyone else doing it as well, or at least volunteering to (Abby seemed surprisingly eager!). Poor Lester really does get the difficult job sometimes having to stay behind and worry when he gets phone calls like that.

ebonyfeather August 23 2010, 21:46:42 UTC

I think this 'verse will be around for a while; Spike's fun to play with.

Glad you enjoyed it.

canadian_jay August 23 2010, 21:36:07 UTC

Lovely last image there! And nice chapter. Good to see those review types get a little sense into them. xP

You might want to give it a little re-read, though - you forgot to capitalize Spike once, and there are a few odd little grammatical slip-ups. ^^

ebonyfeather August 23 2010, 21:51:12 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

I found the two capitalizations- If there are any more glaring blunders, just let me know and I'll fix them (my spellchecker isn't showing anything else...)

fredbassett August 23 2010, 21:51:49 UTC

Oh that was lovely! I just adored the way Neil was prepared to give blood to Spike, and then the rest of the team, too. That definitely gave me the warm fuzzies.

ebonyfeather August 23 2010, 21:59:23 UTC

Spike's one of the team now, and they'll take care of him.

Glad you enjoyed it.

fififolle August 24 2010, 22:36:50 UTC

Wheee! My word, that was brilliant :) Hurrah for the committee.
Let's just say I knew I had this to catch up on, and I figured I'd better read it now, because once I start on a certain other publication, I have a feeling I won't be able to stop.

Damn, all that blood was really hot, LOL. Poor Spike. Neil was an absolute star *nods* Mmm, kissy!Lester, rrrrrr.

YUM!

ebonyfeather August 25 2010, 19:28:37 UTC

Thank you! Glad I could cater to your blood kink *g*. And it wouldn't have been right without a bit of Lester action, now would it?

fififolle August 26 2010, 07:53:16 UTC

Rrrr, it so wouldn't!

knitekat August 24 2010, 23:07:49 UTC

Aww lovely, as was how every one wanted to help. LOL over Abby grinned. “Deal; that was an invite, wasn’t it?” she teased. “Aw, damn. I was looking forward to it, especially after watching Connor and Lester before.”

ebonyfeather August 25 2010, 19:29:35 UTC

I think Abby is just voicing what we're all thinking...

Glad you liked it.

knitekat August 25 2010, 22:30:36 UTC

Hee, I think we'd all agree with Abby.