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[shon_7]

Title: Enraptured
Author: shon-7
Warnings: may make you think afterwards.
Genre: Romance/Spiritual

Enraptured

The sand tickled her toes as she continued her trek along the beach. The wind, blowing particularly strong, caused her ebony hair to lift and swish around her face. Her doe brown eyes gazed out to the horizon, where the sun was just

Comments

[demonlord_lover]

The most deadly mistake a woman can make, that. Trying to uncover what makes a man tick.

Most often, we end up wishing the lid could be put back on the pot. (And I hesitate to mention which pot.)

Lovely drabble. I could see her imaginging this about him in an odd moment of reflection.

[shon_7]

A moment of reflection is always nice to write. Though trying to uncover what makes a man tick is scary. Women have tried and failed, others have just run home crying. The man is a mystery and should stay a mystery hence the same for women ;)

[moonflames23]

Very nice drabble and sweet. I can see how the almost rising sun can make her think of him. In those moments between night and day...quiet, peaceful, and mysterious. And nice beginning for a thought process that will inevitably get her into trouble.

[shon_7]

Lol. Very true. Hm... perhaps on the next challenge I'll write a companion to this drabble? Only in Sesshomaru's persepctive. It will be very interesting :D

[moonflames23]

Ohh...I look forward to that one! It is always nice to look beneath his surface! Not that the surface is bad to look at either! lol

[priestess_skye]

i can't believe i didn't reply to this sooner. i love it, the imagery, the peacefulness of the moment, and her inner thought process of the moment