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Week 7 - Solitary Theme

Jun 13, 2007 14:14

Title: Revision

Author: Forthright

Genre: General

Words: 250

Rating: G

Warnings: none

Canon Universe

Revision

He’d always walked his own path, guided by his own principles. A strong leader is self-assured, self-reliant, self-regulated. Rule over your passions or they’ll be your downfall. Guard against those who attempt to influence you, to use you, to ( Read more... )

oneshot/drabble theme!forthrightly

Comments 10

royalbk June 13 2007, 21:22:11 UTC

Deep and very pretty. It really sounds like something Sesshoumaru would think or say. Royal and aloof - perfect description I must say.

*claps* Very well done. I love it!

forthrightly June 14 2007, 00:07:08 UTC

I stalked him for three days just to wheedle 250 words out of him. ::shakes head in wonder:: He's a hard one to pin down, I must say!

~forthright

paynesgrey June 13 2007, 21:27:01 UTC

Wow, wonderful introspection. I was awed at how perfectly you portrayed his thoughts. Nice work.

forthrightly June 14 2007, 00:09:39 UTC

Thanks, hon. Tweren't easy. Had to be done, though, or people'd begin to doubt there was a brain behind all those raised eyebrows and quiet huffs. ::twinkle::

nebride June 14 2007, 00:29:11 UTC

Wow - beautifully done. Wonderful look into the big dog's head. I love how you portray him. He's intelligent, 3 dimensional and very realistic in your hands. :)

forthrightly June 14 2007, 02:56:17 UTC

Coming from an aficionado like you, that is a most welcome remark! ::bright eyes::

nebride June 14 2007, 14:08:09 UTC

Aficionado? Me? You are too kind. I think "raving fanatic" would be a better description. lol

By the way, I hope you don't mind, I printed out "Battle Lines" and have it on my night stand. There is something about all that "creaking leather" and "very solid, very present and very dangerous..." that sends me off to sleep in a highly pleasant frame of mind. *grins and winks*

shalinilahiri June 14 2007, 04:09:20 UTC

Oh wonderfully introspective and lovingly characterised. It seems like Sesshoumaru himself is speaking here. Nifty job, Forth.

snow_fall June 14 2007, 08:26:39 UTC

Stalking seems to be a very productive past time! I believe that you have Sesshoumaru down to a 'T'. I've been thinking on that the past few days because I had been wondering how Tetsusaiga fit into his philosophy. That would be interesting to know...and who better than you to come up with a reason!

Great piece. Can't wait for next week. heheh. Yeah, I'm going to actually 'assume' that you will be doing one.