I don't not love you! Chapter 4 [ongoing]

[yoshi09]

Title: "I don't not love you!" (Chapter 4)
Author: yoshi09
Rating: PG-13 (ish?)
Genre: FLUFF/amusement/comedy
Disclaimer: Jun and Mao own each other, I just like to borrow them sometimes.
Summary: A rather... awkward night spent with our favorite loveteam. 3rd person limited from Mao-chan's perspective.
Author's Note:
My God, this updating thing is quite

Comments

[novemberbaby]

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. *fangirl mode on*

I love reading Mao-chan's thoughts. xD She really is heads over heels for him, ne? But then again, I don't think any girl could stay calm if someone like Matsujun was showering in their bathroom, lol.

Yay for Nino's brief appearance! I bet he's conjured up a dirty story in his mind about these two. xD

This was definitely a fun read ^___^ Thank you! *chu*

Hahaha, yeah, you should learn to update faster...especially after this chapter 'cause I really want to read Jun's reaction to a barely clothed Mao-chan.

[yoshi09]

Taaaammmyyy!!! *loves* Go update your prompt reply now too, 'kay? ^_^

Yes, she is quite the fangirl. She gets worst and worst as the story goes on, notice?

And of course... Nino has to make an appearance. You know, I only noticed recently that I put him in a lot of my fanfictions somehow. I just feel that Nino hangs out with Jun quite often outside of work (i.e. Nino talking about having a BBQ with Jun)... nothing to do with him being my favorite Arashi member, that's for sure. =P

I'm glad you enjoyed. I shall try to update faster. >.< Oh, and it's amusing as to what happens next. "Poor" Mao-chan is all I'm going to say.

[novemberbaby]

Hai. I've already updated chapter 2 for you ^__^

Fangirl Mao = GOOD. I'm sure Jun founds it normal for other girls to fangirl him but Mao? That's gotta be amusing for him!

LOL, I tend to put Sho in my works just because I want to help "save" his failure image. xD Continue putting Nino in your fics! I love reading his interactions with Jun.

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^__^

[yoshi09]

<.< Jun is so oblivious to Mao's fangirling in this fic. When I write this, I view it from Jun's perspective too because I want Mao to still be her "calm" and "collected" self like she says she is during love. As far as Jun sees, Mao's just being Mao... except, weirder. I won't say anymore about fangirl!Mao in this fic because I might accidentally give something away for Chapter 5.

Lies. You put Sho in there because he's your favorite member. *laughs* Awww, I wish we could meet each other in real life, I could see our Sho vs. Nino vs. Arashi debates already...

mod reminder

[misswoodihut]

I'll give my proper comment later. I just want to remind you of the missing fic header, OK? (*___*)v

Re: mod reminder

[yoshi09]

OH CRAP. I didn't do one because I had one long ago at Chapter One. >.< Will edit to comply with community rules. ^_^ Sorry, misswoodihut... ALSO-- How are your exams?

Re: mod reminder

[misswoodihut]

It's ok. I think I'll be out of my hiatus earlier this time. Probably tomorrow I'll be free already. <3

Re: mod reminder

[yoshi09]

Oh yay! ^_^ I heard from some unnamed members of this community that you're really bad at taking hiatus from MaoJun. ^.~

[chibimui]

ah... I applaud Mao for managing to control her self so well in the presence of a naked, wet MatsuJun xD And Nino. The appearance of Nino <3. I bet he's thinking up ways to blackmail Jun with his new found info. xD Probably demand free lunch for a week.

alright, away from Nino. Amusing. Very amusing. Couldn't stop giggling throughout the entire thing. Mao is so cute xD Wonder what's going to happen next? Honestly if Mao was me, I would've fainted by now. xP

[yoshi09]

Yeah, she's pretty commendable. After all.. she's "cool" in love. =P Hahaha. I just wanted to show how much self-control/restraint she has. Pretty level-headed girl we're dealing with here, but definitely still a fangirl. Haha. If this story was from Jun's perspective it would totally be different. ^_^

Yes, Nino is... very amusing. ^.~ I'm glad you're enjoying this.

[ohcrepe]

update fast! u're killing me with the cliffhanger and mao all nervewrecking XD

uh, i hope this is helpful; japanese don't add suffix to their names when introducing themselves because it's rude.

[yoshi09]

Yeah, that actually is helpful. I noticed that Japanese tend to not add any suffixes when referring to themselves, but I just made Mao do it here because she was joking around. Messed up with Nino though. x_x Thank you for the advice. I'll keep it in mind for sure in upcoming chapter and fics.

[chunamie]

YEY! you updated this one.
mao's turning into a hentai hahaha love the idea ^_^

[yoshi09]

Poor thing tries her hardest not to be perverted but it's hardwhen a shirtless/naked Jun is around. lol. >.