Comments | ebisu_midnights: I don't not love you! Chapter 3 [ongoing]

yoshi09 in ebisu_midnights

I don't not love you! Chapter 3 [ongoing]

Feb 21, 2009 12:51

I know, I know... FINALLY, right? Hope I meet everyone's expectations. And surprise! New avatar right there (threw a lot of you off, didn't it?), created by misswoodihut per my request. *hugs* But I'm only using it for this post (on Ebisu Midights anyway) because it was my personal reward for updating, haha.

As usual-- I do not own anything Mao and Jun related ( Read more... )

fictype: real life, fictype: fluff/romance, fanwork: fiction

Comments 19

misswoodihut February 22 2009, 00:58:01 UTC

awww...Mao-chan is in love with him. But wait, Jun is stammering. Is he starting to fall in love as well? XD

I want to see more fangirl! Mao-chan!!! I love the pacing of this story. The lines were so fun, so typical of this pair who likes to tease each other in real life. The fluff is much well-loved. <3

Now you had us at a cliffhanger. I think it will be an eventful and exciting night, isn't it?

yoshi09 February 22 2009, 20:18:12 UTC

*grins* We all know how Jun feels about Mao-chan... we're just seeing this all from Mao-chan's limited perspective... so, what's obvious to us isn't so obvious to her because she's always in denial! hahahaha. I'll make sure to corner her in a position where she can't run away anymore. *evil cackle* ^.~

I was actually worried about how the response would be to fangirl!Mao. I thought it was an amusing idea, but I didn't know if it would people would find it believable at all. I gave myself the "green light" when I remembered Mao-chan saying "Kyaa~!" during the Natsuki-Mao-Jun date plan, and when Mao said, "Kyaaa~!" again when she was looking through the Hanadan (?) photobook and saw a pic of Matsujun "without clothes on" lying on the bed. hahahaha...

Yay fluff! This fanfic is so refreshing for me to write... lol.

Well, I can't tell you how their night will be until the next chapter. ^.~ Hope to see you there!

novemberbaby February 22 2009, 03:28:15 UTC

*rolls eyes* Jun, the cab driver is giving you a chance to spend the night with Mao-chan. Now go apologize and have a FABULOUS time with the one you secretly love.

^ Haha, I'm sorry, I just had to say that. xD

I love the awkward moments <3 I'm assuming there are more in the next chapter? Huhu, they've got the whole night to themselves...and what shall they do?

More, please?

yoshi09 February 22 2009, 20:22:19 UTC

(Off topic: The song "The Best Mistake I Ever Made" started playing on my Youtube list when I opened up this reply to you. =P Hahaha... what a coincidence.)

LOL, I know, huh? Jun this is a GOOD THING! But of course... they're all both panicking inside at this idea. One whole night. Alone. With your "crush." *laughs*

Next chapter will amuse you, I know it. But I can't give out more than that... we'll see when Chapter 4 is out. *wink*

novemberbaby February 22 2009, 20:47:21 UTC

LOL. I'm not listening to anything right now but I watched Nino's performance of Niji earlier and I got the goosebumps. I was like, "No wonder Melody likes this song so much." ^___^

Ooh la la, a night with Mao-chan. Jun, you better behave! xD

*gasp* Hey, are you getting back at me for not revealing details on my fic? Haha, just kidding. I can't wait to be amused!

yoshi09 February 22 2009, 21:31:00 UTC

Hahaha! I was actually thinking about bringing up getting you back for not revealing anything about your upcoming fic. *laughs* But then decided against it. ^.~

Yes. Waaah "Niji" >.<

And here's a hint... Jun can behave himself... but can Mao-chan? *laughs*

chibi_ai February 22 2009, 08:19:43 UTC

Ha~ You had that one coming Jun! Now go and ravish the ever sweet fangirl! LOL This chapter was godly! Haha... Mao-chan murdered a DVD player; classic! I can't wait for the next chapter... please update soon. =3

yoshi09 February 22 2009, 21:29:19 UTC

Teehee~ I'm glad you liked it!! I really really like your "The Storms Within" fic too. *wink* Sexual tension needs to be released between those two in your fic. hahaha...

fujoshi_anime February 22 2009, 15:25:51 UTC

Wanyaaa~ So worth the wait...
Definitely excited for Chapter 4. Oh, thank you dear Mao-chan for murdering your DVD player! Now you & Jun played Monopoly and remained oblivious to the time and downpour of rain! (Thank you taxi drivers!) Now go and have fun kids! LOL (>_<)

yoshi09 February 22 2009, 21:32:32 UTC

Hahahaha! I like this comment, thank you. *grins*

Chapter 4 will be updated as soon as possible. ^_^

junbait February 22 2009, 19:50:35 UTC

YAY! You finally updated!!! Plotless fics are good!!! especially if they're smutty ;)
I like the idea of Jun being stuck in Mao's apartment eheheh

yoshi09 February 22 2009, 21:39:53 UTC

>.< LOL! I don't know if it'll be smutty. *winks* But I can say the next chapter will tweak your interest. Or at least I hope. ^.~