If It Quacks Like a Duck...
I just ripped through two chapters, killing about 600 words on one and about 200 on another, but I still feel like there's something wrong with the chapters. I'm not entirely happy with them and going with my "moving action" mantra....I'll take a look at it this afternoon when I get home. Still feel like I'm getting there!
There's another loooooooong Peter chapter that needs some culling and I feel like I need to move a Bella chapter to this section to move the narrative. Who knows.
Anyway, sorry to bother you.
There's another loooooooong Peter chapter that needs some culling and I feel like I need to move a Bella chapter to this section to move the narrative. Who knows.
Anyway, sorry to bother you.