Comments | eaves106: He ate my heart

eaves106

He ate my heart

Dec 13, 2009 02:10

He ate my heart
R for implied maliciousness, I guess?
Onkey
Oneshot

( Without a heart, without restraint. )

Comments 14

xxqod December 13 2009, 11:01:14 UTC

:O
Key being emotionless... it's just scary in some way xD
I can really feel the hurt in the middle part.

loved it! <3 ~~

eaves106 December 13 2009, 11:05:55 UTC

Thank you XD You're the first commenter on my journal and my first fic =D

Haha, yeah Onew makes Key heartless TT___TT

pixziestikxz December 27 2009, 08:32:54 UTC

Ithink it's just me, but I don't get it~ ^^"

eaves106 December 27 2009, 08:48:30 UTC

Ahhh, no it's totally fine. This was my first fic and I was trying to get inspiration from Lady Gaga's song, Monster.

But I'll explain!

So...basically, Key is some sort of creation of Onew's. And Onew created Key for the sole purpose of being his lover. We see that Onew regretted having done this and feels it isn't right to make someone love you even if they're not real. So, Onew removes Key's "heart" and since Key doesn't have one anymore, he believes Onew to be a monster and kills him.

pixziestikxz December 27 2009, 08:50:56 UTC

aww. D:

that's good for a first fic, though.

♥

eaves106 December 27 2009, 08:55:37 UTC

LoL, aww, thanks!

I was feeling too overconfident that I could fit all that into less than 150 words >___

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prickilla January 2 2010, 06:10:35 UTC

Nice Drabble 8D
it's so dark D:
and key scares me buuuut it was very well written >D

eaves106 January 2 2010, 08:59:29 UTC

LoL, thank you...I wish I was better at writing the more morbid/serious topics >.>