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Dec 24, 2004 00:06


I can't look you in the eye,
and tell you I'm not sad
Cause then I'd be lying,
and I would feel really bad

But you don't even notice,
when I look away
You just go back to what you were doing,
Believing what I say

It hurts me that you don't notice,
the lies I tell each day
All the pain and suffering I go through,
You don't try to take it away

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Like whoa she_was_tragedy December 24 2004, 17:17:43 UTC
Good job. Sad and depressing, but good.

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Re: Like whoa eatmymeow January 10 2005, 20:30:05 UTC
For the first time...this one aint mine.

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dragongirl69 December 29 2004, 14:43:02 UTC
Can i use your poem/rhyme to put in my book? i would feel very honoured....?

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eatmymeow January 10 2005, 20:30:39 UTC
Like i told mandi...its not mine..so i guess u can take it...lol

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