The Visitor (Part 2)

Sep 16, 2009 09:21

Heeeere's Part 2 then...hope you like ^^

Title: The Visitor (Part 2)
Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Genre: AU, fluffy...
Rating: I'm guessing R just to be safe, but I don't really know...
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters - they are the creation of Annie Proulx. I'm not earning any profit from this - just for fun ^^
Summary: Ennis visits Jack in his cabin in the mountains after a long time away...
Feedback: That'd be fab ^^


A couple of minutes later, Ennis returned to the lounge with a glass of water in his hand. Jack smiled sweetly at him as he entered and then asked him if he was alright. Ennis nodded, put down the glass on the small table in there and walked back over to his companion, gradually sinking down to sit on the floor before him, his back against the couch. Jack spread his legs so he could settle between them comfortably. Ennis did just that and without any words (as usual) leant his head back onto the sofa.

Jack watched him with a small smile on his face. His hair had got considerably longer from when he had last seen him and now, it flopped in pretty blonde curls over the cushion of the seat, twisting and twining everywhere. Obviously, with all the stress of recent events, Ennis hadn’t had time to cut it, and had just let it grow. It wasn’t overly long yet but it still looked beautifully different and much to his despair, Jack could feel his fingers itching to run through it.

It was a relief when Ennis finally moved a little and started up a conversation, immediately giving him something else to concentrate on.

‘’ So...’’ he muttered after a while. ‘’...where’s Lureen?’’

‘’ Oh, she’s on some business trip with her Father in Kansas,’’ Jack replied. ‘’ Been gone for a coupla days now. They took Bobby with ‘em too...Prob’ly for the best.’’

‘’ Why...?’’

‘’ Well, it might not a’ been you at the door t’night. If Bobby were here, he coulda been at risk from his Daddy meetin’ strangers in th’ middle a’ nowhere...’’

Ennis smiled softly. ‘’ Ah’m sorry fer callin’ in so late, Jack. Were ya sleepin’?’’

‘’ Na...Well, jus’ dozin’ really.’’

‘’ Sorry.’’

‘’ S’okay...’’ Jack smiled a little and then slid off the couch so he was sitting with wide legs behind Ennis. Ennis shuffled in response to this and leant into Jack’s warm body, his back against his stomach. Neither of them protested about this sudden intimacy.

‘’ So,’’ Jack began softly, very close to Ennis’s ear. ‘’...didja manage to find those pills alright?’’

Ennis nodded. ‘’ Ah think they were the righ’ ones...’’

‘’ Second shelf?’’

‘’ They were th’ ones...’’

Jack smiled again. ‘’ Wouldja like anythin’ to drink?’’ he asked.

‘’ Mmm...Can ya pass me mah water from up there...?’’

‘’ Sure thin’.’’ Jack did as he was told and then grabbed the glass of wine he had been drinking earlier which was still waiting patiently for him on the coffee table. The two cowboys happily drank together, like so many times before, and then, after a short while, began to share stories of their summers and fishing trips up on the mountains, laughing about occasions past.

They hardly ever got to do this. The outings they took together were becoming rarer and rarer every year, due to work and other necessities, so it was nice to finally spend some time in each other’s company with no one else about. And even though Jack could tell Ennis was upset and a bit disorientated about the divorce, he knew that, somewhere inside, he was relishing this moment too.

But, after about 20 minutes or so, the bubbling conversation trickled into a softer stream once again and Jack rested his head on Ennis’s shoulder, no longer able to keep his hands from running through his curly hair. Ennis half-closed his eyes at the feeling and leant back further, adjusting his position a little. The atmosphere in the room was becoming very intimate and cosy and each of them was slowly losing control of their senses, drowning in the seductive air. Yet, still, neither was protesting - and even, if they had wanted to, they probably couldn’t do anyway.

After a while, Jack gently dropped his hands from Ennis’s hair and let them drift down his front, feeling his tender skin underneath his shirt. Ennis shuffled again and watched his fingers unbuckle his belt to then slip beneath the waistband of his jeans. He didn’t stop him.

‘’ Jack - ah’m sorry for visitin’ so late...’’ he said instead, quietly relaying his words from earlier and trying to distract himself. ‘’...an’ puttin’ all mah troubles on ya...Ah shoulda met ya in th’ day...’’

‘’ S’okay, Ennis...’’ Jack muttered, seeing his companion’s eyes close fully as he began a long, gentle stroke on him. Neither really knew what was happening anymore. The romantic atmosphere had become too much for them. ‘’ S’what buddies are for, right?’’

‘’ Uh...’’ came Ennis’ dazed reply. Jack’s fingers were soft and cool and performing just what he needed. ‘’ Uh, ah guess...’’

Jack smiled and began to get a little faster, thrilled when Ennis’s mouth dropped slightly open. ‘’ So...’’ he muttered gently, nuzzling his friend’s hair. ‘’...you got a place ta stay, pal?’’

‘’ Mmm, well...ah’m kinda stayin’ at a Motel at th’ moment...Th’ lawyer’s from around here so ah wanted ta be near him, but...uh...Alma’s got th’ house so...Ah ain’t really got anywhere ta go after this...’’

Jack nodded and got slightly bolder with his movements on Ennis whose hips rose a little in response, thrusting once or twice into his warm hand. ‘’ Uhhnnnn...’’ he murmured dizzily.

‘’ Well...d’you wanna come an’ stay with me an’ Lureen here for a bit...? We got us a spare room...’’

‘’ Oh, oh-oh, Jack, ah couldn’t do that,’’ Ennis replied. He couldn’t think straight anymore, his mind having jumbled up with all this pleasure Jack was giving him. ‘’ Ah couldn’t...’’

‘’ Ya can if ya want, Ennis...Ya mah buddy an’, well, consider it a gift...’’

‘’ Uhh, Jack, if ya sure...’’ Ennis was thrusting harder now, barely aware of what he was doing.

‘’ ‘Course ah’m sure, Ennis...Wanna help mah friend...’’

‘’ Mmmmnhh...’’ Ennis’s head dropped back onto Jack’s shoulder as his thumb brushed a particularly sensitive part of him. His hands reached to fully unzip his jeans when he involuntarily began to leak over Jack’s fingers. ‘’ Oh...oh...what about t’night...?’’ he murmured after a while, now finding talking difficult.

‘’ Ya can stay here if ya like...Ah don’t mind. You okay with that?’’

‘’ Mmmnuhh...’’ Jack was getting firmer and firmer with his strokes, making him crazy.

‘’ Sorry..?’’

‘’ Mmm, oh Jack...feels so good...’’

Jack smiled and rubbed the clear slick over Ennis, allowing his actions to become much smoother. Ennis bucked, gasping and panting in ecstasy. ‘’ Oh Jack, oh Jack...! Please, Jack...! Oh God, what you’re doing...’’

‘’ Ssh, ssh...It’s okay...’’

Ennis moaned and thrust desperately into the warm tunnel created by Jack’s hand. He could feel his stomach twisting and body tingling by now, overwhelmed by pleasure. Not even his mind could rule over that at the moment - any worries or wary thoughts about what they were doing had been totally forgotten.

Instead, he was squirming between Jack’s legs, his moans and gasps getting higher and higher. Jack carried on stroking though, his other hand slowly petting Ennis’s lazy curls. This intimacy didn’t bother, or alarm, him in the slightest. To his brain, it was purely natural.

But Ennis couldn’t take it much longer. Not sure how to take this, he desperately threw his head further back over Jack’s shoulder and thrust vocally into his firm hand again. ‘’ Oh-oh Jack, ah’m so sorry...ah...oh Jack, ah’m coming!’’

Jack just smiled softly and quickened his pace even more, nuzzling into Ennis’s neck. His back arched magnificently as his thumb again rubbed over a very sensitive part of him. ‘’ Aww, Jack, please...oh...oh, oh!’’ He began to buck his hips further, moaning excessively. ‘’ Oh, oh Jack, ah’m gonna come! Oh!’’

And with a final gasp, Ennis spilled into Jack’s hand over and over again, moaning and gasping his name, until he finally collapsed, exhausted back into his lap.

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