Waiting for the Rain to Fall

[ea_phoenix]

Chapter 1 (rough draft)

Setting sunlight filtering in through the large front windows of Granny’s, glinted off polished tabletops and waxed floors as the clinking silverware and quiet chatter of dining patrons filled the cozy space.  Regina Mills rested back against the red vinyl booth, an adoring smile planted firmly on her dark red lips, listening

Comments

[ariestess]

Okay, I am intrigued. I think I want to see "Lost Before the Dawn" first, but I'm also curious to see where this one will go.

[ea_phoenix]

'Lost' really does have the better opening but this one will be good too. Not as adventure packed though. So one vote for 'Lost', got it! Now to get it out there so more people can vote.

[ariestess]

*nods* Like I said, I'm interested in both, but "Lost" grabbed me more.