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Fic: Initium (G)

Apr 29, 2007 12:53

Title: Initium
Author: Stoicstella
WordCount: roughly 1,700
Rating: Safe for general audiences
Character(s): Eileen, her mother, her grandmother
Challenge: The Pure-blood Prince Fest (prompt: magic)
Summary: In the beginning there was no magic, but Eileen learns from her grandmother it’s history and with it her own.
Notes: Wrestling with some personal ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

i_llbedammned April 30 2007, 01:50:19 UTC

I like the way you intergrated the fairytale with the story. It gave it a nice, mythological feeling which worked nicely with the whole theme of magic and how Eileen felt a fascination with it.

stoicstella April 30 2007, 10:34:19 UTC

Thank-you, my original idea was to integrate the story with a fairytale but then I didn't know what my story was going to be and the rest just sort of developed.

etrangere April 30 2007, 11:27:31 UTC

Gorgeous! I love the overall atmosphere, the two stories echoing each others. Eileen's a very likeable young girl. I love how you tell about magic and its theory, very intriguing stuff.

stoicstella July 5 2007, 16:49:43 UTC

I somehow missed this comment. Thanks for reading it. I am glad you enjoyed it.