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dystopialights

Secret Waltz

Mar 01, 2010 22:08

Secret Waltz
jaemin; pg-13
romance
4,841 words

Of music and celebration, and a love that plays in between.
( “Congratulations, Mr. Shim, it’s a boy!” )

p:jaemin, fic, dbsk

Comments 29

kurogoma March 2 2010, 06:56:08 UTC

you wrote thi!!! :D

i really enjoyed reading this the first time. is this your first jaemin?

i love how changmin was trying to express his feelings (for jae) through his music and clueless jj trying so hard to make things happen for changmin, which is also a sign of love too.

their conversation where jj played him the song over the phone and then changmin realised he was actually freezing his butt off outside was cuteness. ^^

besides creating a song of his own, changmin should pen lyrics more often in life, his evergreen was lovely.

dystopialights March 2 2010, 07:02:26 UTC

haha, thank you :D it's the first time writing jaemin but they were actually my first otp~ i feel like i've come full fandom circle :3

i do agree! idk if he's ever written a song at all, lol, but his lyrics are quite nice. the korean version of 'love in the ice' is hands down one of my favorite songs, ever ♥

samikitty March 2 2010, 08:16:47 UTC

*O* i want to tell you how perfect this is and i can't find enough words that mean 'perfect'. kekeke~~~ it's like... beyond perfect. *O* it's so beautiful and lovely and you can almost hear the music~~ *O* i love how yoochun's such a dweeb and how jaejoong is also a dweeb in the same vein because they're soulmates~~ and i love how changmin is so... shy? a little introverted? but still so... outwardly confident? that it makes jaejoong a little insecure~ *O* ahhh~~ ♥

and that last bit is sooo cute. how it's so romantic and then suddenly jaejoong's like: "great, now let me in because it's cold out here." hahaha!

dystopialights March 3 2010, 06:29:20 UTC

thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

su_dreams March 2 2010, 08:25:54 UTC

&hearts

dystopialights March 3 2010, 06:29:46 UTC

:D♥

cherrieeme March 2 2010, 12:47:36 UTC

beautiful. loved the abstract!changmin and how the way he thinks and expresses his love for jaejoong

love the bodylanguage jaejoong that seems to understand changmin even when he is not speaking.

beautiful ♥

dystopialights March 3 2010, 06:39:00 UTC

thank you! those two definitely have a special relationship ;D i'm glad you liked, and thanks again for commenting ♥

vaguelynormal March 2 2010, 12:52:42 UTC

this was magical, i loved every word.

dystopialights March 3 2010, 06:40:03 UTC

thank you :)