love on a string

[dystopialights]

love on a string
yoosu; pg-13
romance
6,608 words

My second entry for the dbsk_secretgame Challenge, which snagged second place for Best Junsu ♥

Comments

[chdairkld]

...wow. the end was really really scary and my heart is beating so fast. i think i would have cried if the ending were different! it's incredible how you wrote yoosu growing up but yet it was not stretched out and is actually rather short---but i feel like we really didn't miss out on anything.

there is an innocence to their world, even yoochun's. realistic and lovable.

thanks!

[dystopialights]

:D innocence was definitely a major theme for this one, so i'm happy you thought so. thanks so much! ♥

and, goodness, sorry about the double post, but those typos... lol D:

[ting5]

Wow my heart was racing when Yoochun was freaking out and his dad was pounding on his door..woots *taking deep breathes* this is very very good..in a way it's good that Yoochun's out of that hell hole and with Su by his side ^^

[dystopialights]

thank you!

[myfadingmelody]

gah. the entries are making my heartache. this one too. so good~

[dystopialights]

they were all really great ;) thank you!

[ekin_hardy]

i've read this b4 at the secretgame comm...n damn it stuck to me...I love it very very very much...such a great combination of pov's

[dystopialights]

thank you! ♥

[latenightchai]

ah, thank you! there were are a lot of amazing entries, so i was more than happy with second. the first place winner definitely deserved to the title! I would definitely suggest going over to dbsk_secretgame to take a look at them all ;D