FIC: What is Offered

[featherxquill]

Title: What is Offered
Author: lash_larue
Pairing: Fleur/Gabrielle
Rating: R
Prompt: She wanted to teach her little sister about boys and sex. Somewhere along the way that plan broke down.
Content Information/Warnings: Femmeslash, Incest
Summary: Who teaches whom, and what?
Author's notes: I hope that this fits the prompt okay. I actually had a much harder

Comments

[entrenous88]

Oh dear, it's a very difficult situation Fleur has awoken to indeed. There's something ironic about Gabrielle feeling as though the boys she's been with have assaulted her (as they sound like they have) but then not getting Fleur's consent/beginning things while her sister is asleep.

[lash_larue]

I am unsure how I feel about this one myself, thank you for commenting.

L

[alley_skywalker]

Oh wow. I was very curious about how this sort of paring could be written out and incest is not something I usually ship but this played out very nicely. Great job :)

[lash_larue]

Well, the extra was "incest, with lots of guilt". I actually like Fleur/Gabrielle, and my initial idea was kind of mildly crack but I just could not come up with a credible way for an intelligent and sophisticated young woman of legal age in this era to not know about masturbation.

Enter the guilt. I'm glad you thought it worked, thanks,
L

[cabepfir]

Fleur does give some sound advice to her sister - it was so pleasing to hear her wise words in the first half of the fic. And the ending is just right - what will happen now?
A good reading.

[lash_larue]

Thank you, I appreciate your comment and that you thought Fleur meant to be a good sister,

L

[woldy]

I liked Fleur's supportive conversation with Gabrielle, & it made the end so much more heartbreaking. Nice work!

[lash_larue]

The thing about guilt is it makes you feel guilty, I guess.

Thank you for commenting, I'm happy that you thought it worked okay.

L