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Gift for oobiemcruby

Dec 02, 2010 19:45

To: oobiemcruby
From: beingfacetious

Title: Bail and a Phone Call
Characters and/or Pairings: Amy/Rory
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: One expletive
Summary: Leadworth does not have a prison. But Amy Pond will find a way to end up in one, anyway.
Word Count: 2,763

Bail and a Phone Call

amy/rory, fanfiction, amy, rory, het

Comments 30

jessicaqueen December 2 2010, 09:58:28 UTC

This. Is. Awesome. Amy is just so brilliantly in-character as a somewhat surly and overly-entitled youth with random outbursts of temper (possibly the only one of those in Leadworth, from the sounds of it, LOL), and her relationship with Rory is absolutely spot-on perfect. Plus, the whole thing is simply hilarious.

beingfacetious December 28 2010, 15:20:15 UTC

Thanks so much! I actually really love writing Amy, perhaps more than I like her actual character; she's so interesting. I'm really glad the characterization worked for you. Thanks for the lovely review!

professor_spork December 2 2010, 10:13:56 UTC

God, but I love the easy, casual humor of this piece.

And I want Officer Edwards to be canon.

beingfacetious December 28 2010, 15:20:40 UTC

♥

I have another Office Edwards fic half-started.

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beingfacetious December 28 2010, 15:22:22 UTC

I'm so pleased you liked it! As I didn't have much to go by as far as requests, I was a bit worried about producing something that wasn't what you wanted, especially with twisting the "in jail" suggestion so far, hahaha. But I'm so happy that it turned out to be something you enjoyed! Thank you for the sweet review and Merry Christmas again!

navaan December 2 2010, 12:01:47 UTC

“You know,” she says, tilting her head to look at him, “if you pay my window fine, you won’t have to buy me a Christmas present.”

He rolls his eyes. “I’ll pay your fine if you want me to, but I’m also going to buy you a Christmas present.”

That's so cute. A very nice moment between the two. I think you captured both of them very well in this piece. :)

beingfacetious December 28 2010, 15:56:10 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :-)

yamx December 2 2010, 12:51:42 UTC

I love the way you portray Leadsworth here. It is, if that can be said of a place, perfectly in character. And the dynamic between Amy and Rory is great. :)

beingfacetious December 28 2010, 15:56:26 UTC

Thanks so much!