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fic: Two Can Play At That Game (8/?)

Dec 23, 2007 10:51

Title: Two Can Play At That Game
Rating: PG
Spoilers: back to general 'taking place well after s3' warning
Disclaimer: I'm too tired to care if they get me

Summary: There's such a thing as being too clever for your own good...

Notes: Whacko!AU!Muse still beavering away at this instead of doing Socially Responsible things like cleaning the house ( Read more... )

Comments 3

jjsngadget February 7 2008, 17:41:29 UTC

"All I need you to be is the Doctor," she said, resting her hand on his head. He didn't shy away, as Jack almost thought he might, but instead lay quiet, even smiling a little as she stroked the rumpled brown hair --

"-- All right, that's two right hands?"

"You looked like you needed petting," Jack said innocently.

Despite giving me a lovely visual I have a question. How did the Doctor know it was two right hands? Though I can totally see that happening, Martha petting the Doctor, then Jack joining it. It's squeeable.

I just read the fic today and I have to say I'm loving what you're doing. Keep up the good work.

robling_t February 7 2008, 20:48:51 UTC

'Cause of the direction they were coming from. ;) (If it was Martha's left hand it would have been on the other side of his head, plus both the thumbs were going in the same direction.) Glad you're liking it, other than the stage directions ;) !

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robling_t February 25 2008, 05:24:34 UTC

*snerk* Never gives up, does he. ;)